April 27th, 2013 at 07:00pm
Let's Pretend We're Porn Stars - Comments
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This was interesting :) I liked it. Was a little hard to follow when the point of view changed, I'd suggest writing that the pov changes so readers know which guy the speaker is. But other than that there wasn't any major errors I think. :)April 27th, 2013 at 10:38am
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@ Synful Cocktail
Thanks. It was really fun making it. and sorry for any mistakes. I've tried my hardest to see them. (I am french and english but I am better in french!)April 15th, 2013 at 11:10pm -
I loved it! Mmmmmmm, all the boys in porn. LET ME AT 'EM!April 15th, 2013 at 04:37am
Thanks! And yeah I will do that, I thought it would make it hard. thanks for telling me!