Idiosyncrasies - Comments

Here to judge the first round of Sixth Time's the Charm!

I don't read many One Direction fanfiction pieces - I'm not a fan of the band and I tend to find many of them slightly cliché and riddled with grammar errors - but this really is a delight to read. The way you describe everything is simply wonderful. The description of the coffee pots being like blood banks? It almost makes me laugh in a way because my blood is pretty much made of coffee so that's something I can definitely relate to and I think that's something you continue on throughout this. You mention that Zayn is a celebrity, but throughout this entire thing you paint him as Mr Regular-Joe, this down-to-earth guy like the rest of us which I think a lot of people might forget that he is, underneath all of the paparazzi and newspaper headlines. It's a simple thing, but it makes a fantastic one-shot.

Like a few others said, this would be a really interesting idea to bring forward as a fully-fledged chaptered story but I think it also stands really well as a singular piece as well. Good work!

@ wrokondude
YES MA'AM!!!! jk I might need help with a plot in that case

I DEMAND MULTIPLE CHAPTERS!!!

That was so good! I love your style of writing and your vocabulary is absolutely captivating! xx

This is the best one shot I've ever read in my life! So amazing :)

honestly one of the best one direction fanfictions I have ever read - despite it being only a one shot. your use of language is absolutely beautiful. really amazing, thank you for restoring my faith in the one direction fandom.

Aww. That's sad, I think you should keep going with it. Amazing one shot nonetheless.

This is absolutely beautiful. It's a shame that you intend it to be a one-shot (undoubtedly one of the best and most captivating of this kind) as this could be a wonderful story. Thank you for posting this piece of gold.

Wow, your writing is fantastic and pleasantly refreshing when most One Direction oneshots I read are predictable and grammar hell. This is lovely. Thank you for posting it. xx

oh i think this is a one shot lol well i feel stupid, anyway i think you should make it into a story if it is

Your writing is absolutely phenomenal. I am completely hooked after one chapter, I cannot wait until you update