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  • Katyara

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    This update made my day :tehe:
    June 5th, 2008 at 04:06pm
  • Katyara

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    wow! I like the start tehe

    I see a few grammar mistakes but nearly all of them are minor : D
    April 30th, 2008 at 09:59pm
  • xFar-From-Lonelyx

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    I think that it is off to a good start. A few suggestions if i may?
    Watch your word usage :]
    Other then that its great
    I am definately looking foward to more :]
    April 30th, 2008 at 07:07am
  • Ermin.

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    It looks good so far!
    I'll give it a go and subscribe!
    =]
    April 30th, 2008 at 06:47am
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