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okay gosh. I'd really like to know how some of you can turn a small, really small amount of words and make them into something so sweet and just

and like darlig hero said, I really liked that it was just 'him' and 'you' because it gives the whole thing a different feel then others and it makes it more rough.

Is it weird to think this was cute? Well, it was. I loved it.

Still love it whatever that means

This was sweet! I love that you didn’t directly introduce any characters really. It was more of ‘he’ and ‘you’. It makes it a lot more relatable to the reader.
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OMFG that's me

Oh my God, so beautiful! I love that last part, "He's saved you from yourself. Whatever that means." Stunning work.

THIS. Ahhh, the feelings. Great work.

begging for someone to stop you because nobody could like the real you, the real you.

So little words but you get the job done
HITS LIKE A PUNCH.

These masks suffocate you.
OMFG what is this how do you do it. oh my jesus. People use thousands of words trying to do what you do in four.

And you two, you're immaculate. Cohesive and coherent.
That's just so beautiful I can't even function.

Because you know he loves you like he means it.
YOU ARE SO PERFECT PLEASE EMBRACE ME

(He saved you from yourself. Whatever that means.)
A;SLDKFJ;ALDKFJWOIEUR[OQIU I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN WHAT YOU DO TO ME.