XXIII IX XI - Comments

Ugh, this was just too perfect. I feel like I can't comment on it properly because I have no words describe how much I loved it.

I love how personal this is, and the fact that you posted it is amazing. It was so beautifully written and I could really tell you cared a lot about the person you wrote it about. It left me, like everyone else who read it, quite speechless.

Thank you for posting it, it was an amazing piece of writing and I’m glad I got to read it.

Lovely job!

Everything about this was perfect and flawless. I love personal pieces like this because it shows you a whole new side of the writer who posted it.

I have no criticism for you on this piece, because there were no mistakes and it was perfect. It left me (and apparently a lot of the other readers) speechless. Not many stories or poems have the ability to do that. I can relate to this very much and I thank you for posting it, because it reminded me of a boy I can't stop thinking about it. Except I don't like how yours didn't like sloths, hahaha.

Anyway, this was perfect. I like how you let us in your life here.

Truthfully, this made me want to cry because on a level, I can relate to this. A little too much; to even a painful point. And I hate it. But this was beautifully written and hurt more because it came from your heart. I don't even have much to say other than I know how it feels.

I almost cried reading this, which is saying a lot because few stories / books have made me cry.
I have no other words to say; I'm utterly speechless.