Only Hate The Road When You're Missing Home - Comments

This is really good, I really enjoyed it!

I'll be honest, I wouldn't have known that English isn't your first language if hadn't have said something! This was so well written.

I'm actually half dutch, my grandparents were born over there and they came over here and had my mum :) Although, I can only say two things in dutch...haha.

I would never know English wasn't your first language, this was perfect. I love your banner and layout, it made your story more enjoyable even though it would have been just as fantastic with no banner and a white layout. I felt so much for Max and Teagan with this, I was rooting for them but it just wasn't meant to be I guess =[. I agree with the commenter below me, I think this would make an amazing chaptered story if you choose to write more =]

This is awesome. Really well written. I also feel as though this would be great as a chaptered fic as a sequel to the one shot :)

Really enjoyed this :)