The feels :( I feel so bad for Perry, but it just makes me love him more. I think you did a great job with the characters and their personality traits assigned to them. Giancarlo came off like he had no heart, but I think that with more assertiveness from Perry he could grow into a better man. I loved this story, thank you so much for entering my contest! The winners will be announced soon!
June 8th, 2013 at 02:45am