Keep Me Next to You - Comments, page 20

neon.band.aids. (100)

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@ gcfansara1
Thank you so much for your comment! Better late than never!

May 31st, 2013 at 05:22am

gcfansara1 (100)

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The Cinco de Mayo comment was gold! I loved it. This is my first time commenting because I figured I would get through to what you had most recently posted, and I am in love with this story. Such an original idea to have a female coach! Keep up the amazing writing! Can't wait to read more.

May 31st, 2013 at 05:19am

katiexlee (100)

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I love this story! The Cinco de Mayo comment definitely made me laugh. I wonder what will happen when the guys figure out that it was Luke Schenn (which I'm assuming it was) who broke her heart. Can't wait for the next chapter!

May 30th, 2013 at 03:59am

oreo1710 (100)

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Just found this story today and I already love it. Can't wait to find out more and to see what relationships come out of it

May 30th, 2013 at 02:33am

BreakYourHeart (100)

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Praise the Lawd!

May 29th, 2013 at 11:46pm

kartal1984 (100)

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@ neon.band.aids.
fantastic!! I can't wait :)

May 29th, 2013 at 09:12pm

moshi_ (100)

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AH, so glad you got your story back. :) That Cinco De Mayo comment cracked me up. I loved it. haha
I hope Jon starts to go after her secretly. Now that he knows she's burned over what happened with Luke, I'm not sure being straight forward and open about it will be good for him.

May 29th, 2013 at 08:56pm

neon.band.aids. (100)

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@ kartal1984
Haha you must be psychic. I wrote him into a later chapter! Stay tuned!

May 29th, 2013 at 08:46pm

kartal1984 (100)

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that was a fantastic update!! Well worth the wait!! :) I am not sure what will happen the next update but I think you should bring some drama in with Luke - he could be playing for one of the teams that the guys will play against and stir some sh*t up or something!! Ohh I loves drama!!! :) Update this soon please!

May 29th, 2013 at 08:34pm

HereinParadise (100)

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Hahahahahahaha Cinco De Mayo. Best time ever! Loved the update

May 29th, 2013 at 08:22pm

rizzoabby (100)

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Love love love this story!! Always get so excited when I see an update.

May 29th, 2013 at 08:18pm

dribblestheturtle (100)

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Can any amazing person tell me how to do the links please? That'd be awesome.

May 27th, 2013 at 08:25pm

bartom (100)

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i just got so excited and stopped studying and just log on here when i got an e-mail that the story was updated! haha. love it

May 26th, 2013 at 09:29pm

BreakYourHeart (100)

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Jonny Jonny I Believe

May 26th, 2013 at 05:29am

skyegirl96 (100)

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I love it. I love that you made him decide to go after her secretly. It's going to make the story so much more entertaining. Even more than it has been so far. I loved this chapter. There was a smile on my face the whole time. I can't wait for more.

May 26th, 2013 at 03:02am