Sorry about your friends, but your update was amazing. I'm glad that they boys worked it out and now Jonathan needs to go get his girl and let her know how much he loves her. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS.
Loved the update. I was so glad she took charge and laid everything on the table!! No more secrets between those three:) Jon better hurry and smooth over the model comment.
I've had a. Terrible week. Both my grandparents are in the hospital and I am states away and home sick in bed. I literally have been cut off from the world the last past few days, but was excited to see that when I came on hear this morning there was an update! I really want Kat with Jon, idk why. I think Patrick just feels left out. Can't wait to see what happens!
I really wanted all the drama to end, but man seeing that fight and watching her go straight to his arms didn't seem like Kat at all. But maybe in the morning they'll all figure out how to handle this maybe she should finish the season, go to a new team, figure out her stuff with the boys. or maybe she'll figure out that neither of them are right for her, i mean she did just kiss patrick (who i really want her to be with) and then right into Jon's arms. love it can't wait for more and really can't wait to see where it goes. -s
You did a pretty good job for only taking a short time to write it.
I think both Kat and Jon will try and get to Pat to talk to him about the situation. Honestly I have no idea how they will get him to keep his mouth shut about this relationship. It's definitely complicated that's for sure. As much as I love how her and Pat are I think they are more suited as friends. Kat and Jon are great together and I really think they are more suited.
okay so i've been a silent reader for all of this story. first off i have to say i kind of saw where you were going with patrick but truthfully i didn't like it. the reason is that she needs a best friend on that team, and yeah you can say jon, but they are very alike when it comes to thinking. she needs someone to balance her in life and that is pat. he's crazy, loud, out there while she is more quiet, assertive, and calm. you could try and say "oppisites attract" but it's only for a short time before things start happening that mess everything up. i guess i just really hope you keep her with jon because i feel patrick would be better as a friend, especially when the two of them get hard headed about something and need that third party to step in and make them see the other side of opinion.
sorry this is lengthy. i do love the story though and i'm glad you updated. i can't wait for the next update!!