May 8th, 2008 at 11:25pm
A Life I Left Behind; For You - Comments
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awesome updateMay 8th, 2008 at 10:51pm
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Aww shy Gerard is cute I agree :D This piece of paranoid thinking is honestly like me "But that was when I sent him crashing to the ground... oh God; he was just saying it to get rid of me!" I think it's really great and it gets inside the kind of panic he was proberley thinking ..so nice one.
The nervousness is really well shown I'm glad they get past it !Gerard starting to open up yay! I want to yell at Frank that he more than likes Gerard .....I don't think he'd hear me so I'll tell you instead.May 8th, 2008 at 09:49pm -
^ Your FCs are like, prophetic. XDMay 8th, 2008 at 09:31pm
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Awww I really loved this chapter!
Shy Gerard is the most adorable thing ever!
<3
I want more like now!
Oh and... FC again. 8)May 8th, 2008 at 09:25pm -
Author comment time!
silver devastation.: Another FC? *looks at you in amazement* XD Thanks for that. I'm glad you found that bit funny, lmao! You're just one awesome person.
I'd love to hear more from what you have to say, my lovely. *hints*
Waking__The__Demon: Yeah, poor them. :( thanks for reading!
Buffy-willow: Melanie is one drama bitch of a ness. ... wait, wtf? XD Thanks for the answering machine comment; stuff like that makes me realise what else I can do in stories! :D
Mindfreak.: Thank you v. much. I pretty much gave you your A/C in a PM, so thanks! :D
Emmy Angeldust.: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you like it. :D
Dude- It's Vonni.: Yeah, but at least it's cute and sad. :P Thank you!
genesisXmurderscene: You're gonna have to read to find out! ;)
ilovefrankieiero: Thank you so much! :D
BegMyHeartToBeat: Thank you :D No, you won't know until later, I'm afraid. I'm glad I made you laugh and this comment has been REALLY useful. Thank you lots!May 8th, 2008 at 09:19pm -
Wow that was a really good chapter =] I want to know what Gerards worried it will be like ! But I'm guessing I won't know till later on in the story *sulks* so you better update fast. I loved the random funny bits like the shiny shoes and the damn I wish I'd washed my hair today. Well they made me laugh :D
Awwww poor Frank .....I hope his mum sorts herself out even if not for herself for him . And his old girlfriend can go away he IS going to be with Gerard! ..thats another thing that I want to happen soon :DMay 8th, 2008 at 07:36pm -
Wow, you're a great writer! I cant wait to see what happens next!
*subscribes*
May 7th, 2008 at 09:21am -
omg wht's gonna happen next.
NEED.TO.KNOW!
haha
xDMay 6th, 2008 at 07:09am -
The beginning of that was cute :cute:
But the ending was a little sad :sad:
MORE SOON!May 6th, 2008 at 04:05am -
Oh wow!!
I like this!!
I can't wait for more.
*subscribing*May 6th, 2008 at 02:51am -
I quickly drop his hand and look down at my feet. Wow, my shoes are reaaaaaally shiny.
lmao, that made me laugh.
Hm, I thought for sure that I commented on the last chapter. Oh well, I guess I didn't.
Mm, I had a hard time to stay interested, like, I found myself skimming through paragraphs to take it all in, but I guess that's just how I read. lol. I did find sometime kind of odd, though...you said, first, that the vodka bottle broke, and then after the message was left he threw the glass in the garbage...then he filled up the vodka bottle with alcohol and gave it to his mom...? I thought it was broken? Or maybe I'm just missing out on a paragraph or something.
Anyways, this is really well written, and I like the atmosphere you have created at the cafe where Frank works. It goes well with the story.
:cute:May 6th, 2008 at 02:12am -
Oooh.. Melanie.. methinks,,, DRAMAAA
awr, Gerard really likes him
I feel sorry for Frank and his Mum - Hearing the answering machine message really brought that in to focus =[
mooore soon!
xoxoxoxMay 6th, 2008 at 01:29am -
poor frankie and geeMay 5th, 2008 at 10:43pm
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FC!
Wow, my shoes are reeeeally shiny!
:lmfao
Why did i find that so funny... no idea!
xD
FC again. 8)May 5th, 2008 at 09:40pm -
suitably explosive: You've been my FC twice now... you stalking me? XD oj. Thanks so much! :D SP rock.
Waking__The__Demon: Thank you! :)
genesisXmurderscene: Whoa indeed. XD I shall be updating v. soon!
forgetmariah.: Thank you, I try to make the characters realistic. Thanks VERY much for the helpful comment! :D
Buffy-willow: You awesome child! Long comments are the sex. Thank you for the little quote-comments. :D Imagining Frank in a canoe is something I would do too, y'know. *dances*
Thanks, I try to use discription as much as I can. I'm glad it shows!
Love! <3
satchel: Merci *bows*.
Margie Abberline: New obsession? Thanks! :D I'll try and KEEP it your obsession.
My Coffee Romance: Cute is what we aim for. OMG I'm cool. XD
Dude- It's Vonni.: Thanks for the comment, hope I'll hear from you again. =D
BegMyHeartToBeat: Canoeing is an awesome thing Frank should take up, lmao. Thanks for the comment, hon!
Wow, I say thank you a lot in my comments... XDMay 5th, 2008 at 09:37pm -
I love this bit "I clearly need to get a new hobby. Maybe I’ll take up canoeing." its so random it makes me laugh :D Thanks can't wait to read more :DMay 4th, 2008 at 02:10pm
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This is really, really good.
Update soon!May 4th, 2008 at 11:27am -
that was so cute! i love it XDMay 4th, 2008 at 01:01am
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OMG!
*new obsession*
What an amazing story!May 4th, 2008 at 01:00am
Learnt more about Gerard's character, which was goood... bless him
xoxoxox