The Rhine River Jewel - Comments

I am changing some things in the prologue so if you're confuzzled please re-read it! I <3 all of you! :)

You like it? yay!!!!! i thought it was too short but that's good news! i can't seem to write chapter four though. writers block, which is ironic because i know what I'm going to write about in that chapter but i just can't write it out good. has that ever happened to you? i mean probably not but.....{and IF i keep working on it it will probably be around three books long. but that's probably not going to happen ;) and could you tell me what poems you got published? i REALLY want to read them ;)

This is absolutely fantastic!! You describe fluently, making the reader experience what your characters are experienced. I can tell you character is vigilant yet powerful, and I absolutely adore this!! It is such a dramatic, emphasized story, you should pick out a layout for it to wrap it all up :) Very nice job, this was stunning!

Hey! Post next chapter up soon! (If you can guess who this is tell me via message. If not, LOOK ON MY PROFILE!) (Ps, STILL LOVING IT SO FAR!)