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  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Update soon
    Can't wait for more chapters
    I love this story :)
    It's just amazing, your a amazing writer :D
    June 10th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Uh oh, Brian got Michelle pregnant, what is he going to do?? What is going to happen?? I can't wait to see what you have planned. Obviously we know she is going toe nd up with Brian but how they got to that point we will see. Oh I love the song that is in the summary, from one of my favorite Movies :)
    June 9th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Wow, well at least Val and Matt are separating and they are going to explore their feelings. I am seriously excited! At least we know she ends up with Brian!
    May 31st, 2013 at 07:41am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I like that Val is nice in this one haha :)
    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    Can't wait to find out what happens
    I loved it :D
    May 31st, 2013 at 05:30am
  • angelbyyourside

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    Now I need a drink!!! Can they all just share and live happily ever after? Hahaha. But we already know where this is gonna end.

    Damn you write so well I get so engrossed in their journey--I sometimes forget that this is all basically a flashback.
    May 31st, 2013 at 05:17am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    Wow I didn't see that one coming haha
    Update soon
    Great chapter
    Can't wait for the next chapter
    May 29th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    @ Embrace the Shadows
    Oh I know :)! lol, which I will be fine with!
    May 28th, 2013 at 07:12pm
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    @ Matt Sanders;
    Don't forget how the story starts! Eventually, marrying Brian will happen. Lol.
    May 28th, 2013 at 05:41pm
  • RebeccaT

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    Omg i kind of and kind of didn't see that coming! Wow
    May 28th, 2013 at 05:19pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Well Zacky is certainly pissed that she was gone for a while, hmmm....now I wonder what is going to happen and the whole affair starts with Matt! Your stories always get so intriguing and interesting :)!! I know she doesn't wanna like Brian but he is a sensible option since he isn't tied down to anyone!
    May 28th, 2013 at 03:05pm
  • RebeccaT

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    You cannot end it like that!! :( I wonder if he knows!! What if he does and he is mad that she didnt step forward and say they slept together. I cant wait for the next chapter :) :) :) :)
    May 28th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    What the hell o.O you can't end it like that, does he know or does he just want to know why she isn't talking to him?
    Update soon before I die not knowing :O
    Can't wait for more to come
    Fantastic chapter even if you ended it like that haha :D
    May 27th, 2013 at 08:19am
  • helena_88

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    whoopsie-daisie Mr. Green i think he knows.. OR he's just annoyed that she keeps avoiding him Very Happy
    May 27th, 2013 at 08:06am
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    @ Embrace the Shadows
    Oh I have a feeling and it's like me too :), I can't not choose :)!
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:18am
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    @ Matt Sanders;
    I was TRYING to write a story that wasn't about Matt... It didn't work too well... You'll see what I mean in a couple of chapters.
    May 27th, 2013 at 12:05am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    So I forgot to comment the last time I rad this, since I started to read it and oh my gosh! They did it and she remembers but he doesn't but something tells me that he does remember now! I wonder what they need to talk about! Ahahah I giggled when you said that he is better than Matt! I mean I wonder....hmmm
    May 26th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love this story :)
    I almost peed myself when I read "I'll fuck you until you bleed" haha :D that was funny hehe
    Update soon
    Amazing chapter
    Can't wait for more
    May 26th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ amodernmyth88
    lol!
    May 25th, 2013 at 08:09pm
  • helena_88

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    I’m gonna come over there and fuck you until you bleed! -LMFAO!!!! Ya know you'd think that would be punishment for Zee too- but uhm, is there something he needs to tell everyone?? Mr. Green

    aweeh bri is a douche sometimes.. but staying away from each other feels like the right thing to do right now.. Very Happy
    May 25th, 2013 at 01:12pm
  • helena_88

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    well okay i dunno what to say about that chapter except for aaweh!! so cute!! Mr. Green
    May 20th, 2013 at 11:17am