July 21st, 2013 at 08:32am
I only read the first chapter, but I'll most definitely be reading more. I seriously love Danny Phantom and have been looking for a nice story to read on here. Yours was the one. I love the description you add and you seem to capture the personalities of Danny, Valerie, and Danni perfectly. At first it was slightly strange to read them cursing, but after a little while I became used to it. They are teenagers after all, haha.
The only thing that I would recommend you doing is going over the chapter because you switched point-of-views a couple times. However, I was still able to understand what was going on.
I'm going to recommend, subscribe, and love this story! Seriously, great job!
Hey, thanks :) Sorry, I didn't see this earlier. I"m not on here much and I should really work on that. I have two chapters more on here that I'm ready to submit.