I am absolutely in love with this story! The writing is amazing, it's super interesting, and it flows so well together. I too am finding myself doubt Johnny and Brian a bit. I think maybe they had something to do with her father's death, maybe indirectly?? This has me on the edge of my seat. I never, and I mean NEVER read stories that are incomplete, and especially with only 10 chapters so far, but I couldn't not read this one. I cannot wait to read more...looking forward to the next chapter!
It would be quite a twist if we found out later that Zacky was the most sincere person in that whole house. The last couple of paragraphs ended this chapter so well and when you mentioned J.A. it made complete sense. Fantastic job on this story, I am so happy I gave it a shot. Take care and I hope we'll hear from you soon. :)
It's taken me 3 days but I have just finished this story and I must tell you I am craving more, it's so cute how they all introact and I like how maybe she can't see that she actually likes being there and I think maybe they guys are a little more trusting now, this story has me very intrigued and don't get me started on your length like omg it's so perfect and we'll written I very much enjoyed this more soon I hope