I Am Sin and I Am Temptation. - Comments

Oh my goodness gracious, I love how much of a bad boy Nick is in this. every one always sees him as the sweet perfect innoccent little guy with his purity ring and all that jazz, but you did a total twist on the typical innocent Nick and made him into such a bad ass, which was the thing that I loved most about this story. You didn't do any of the typical cliches and it made this story so unique and interesting. I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next with Nick and Penelope's friendship!

Comment swap brought me here! Haha i dont usually read any fan fiction... so this was a little out of the my comfort zone and i am totally ok with that! I like rryinf new things! So that didnt stop me from reading your story! Overall i think this was very well written. This story had great imagry and i like the words you chose to describe the characters voices. It got me hooked even though i am not a huge fan fiction person. This was very well done! Please continue writing! I write iriginal fiction, maybe you could check out some of my work? Anyway, very well done! -cassie.

I'm a little lost. The boy was having an argument with his parents. She overheard it. Who is she? How did she come to be in this environment? What environment? They were thrown together, but how? I'm sure this question is soon to be answered, I will keep reading.

Hello! I was sent to your story by comment swap!

I found the prologue to be very intriguing, with how you described Nick Jonas to be a rebel. I enjoyed reading Penelope's chat with him, her offer for him to come live with her. That tells me that she's a caring person.

I also really like the strong contrast between Joe and Nick. Joe is so light and happy, while Nick is so dark and rebellious.

Keep adding chapters to this story, it's quite good!

Can't wait for more!

I love that song!!! :D And I also love new Nick J stories!!

First off love the title, it got me super curious to read this story. Also, I love your layout for the story too.

Now as I read this, it got me curious to see how this story goes. I adore stories where people make Nick Jonas a rebel or worse. To me they are more interesting, then him being all "innocent" all the time. I also can't see any grammar/spelling errors, so plus side on that.

I cant wait for more
Great job