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  • NeonStripedNinja

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    @ SamsJam
    Thank you for the criticisms. (: Seriously, it means a lot.
    I'll go change the little mistake in 13.
    May 10th, 2013 at 12:11am
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    OMG. WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN TO OLI NOW?

    my emotions are running rampant.
    May 9th, 2013 at 11:46pm
  • SamsJam

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    This is fab. My sister and I are reading it together like book club :')

    Few criticisms, though: Be careful of tense changes. Also in Chapter 13 it says he changes his money from euros, but in the UK we have pounds, not euros.

    Otherwise it's great
    May 9th, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • YouMeAtATL

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    The emotion in this is slowly killing me. Gah!!! Josh and Oli are so fucking amazing together and josh is like the sweetest omfg and Oli is so helpless right now...he needs to get that crazy mother fucker in prison I swear
    May 9th, 2013 at 01:08am
  • FransykesFics

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    what, no..oh my god, no! Good chapter, but i'm crying now!
    May 7th, 2013 at 03:21pm
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    Holy shit. I did not expect that. (Thanks for the quick update though!)
    May 7th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • monioli

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    I am so upset that there isn't more to read right now :'(
    May 7th, 2013 at 02:24am
  • piercethevengeance

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    WHY ARE THERE NOT MORE CHAPTERS OH MY GOD
    May 7th, 2013 at 01:53am
  • AndThenSheBled

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    oh shit!!!!
    update i love this and it's so damn sad!!
    May 7th, 2013 at 01:47am
  • YouMeAtATL

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    Shit just got real...
    May 7th, 2013 at 01:13am
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    i hate you ;___;
    May 7th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • RachelCantFly

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    I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OH MY GOD
    May 6th, 2013 at 01:55am
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    I'm definitely excited to read the next chapter!
    May 5th, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • Lovelessrose

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    This is amazing, oh god !
    May 5th, 2013 at 12:24pm
  • monioli

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    Hurry! I need more!
    May 5th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • niekot

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    i hope the only dramatic thing in the next chapter will be the plane crash! teehee
    May 5th, 2013 at 12:27am
  • Lovelessrose

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    UUUUPDATE! Please, i love this fanfic!
    May 1st, 2013 at 03:54pm
  • FransykesFics

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    this chapter is so cute and the end made me worry..well written!
    May 1st, 2013 at 11:47am
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    Holy shit, this story is fabulous. And it's so cute, I can't stop smiling :)
    April 23rd, 2013 at 03:22am
  • FransykesFics

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    the new chapter is amazing..again! ;)
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:10pm
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