Unforgiving Love - Comments

This is really good, I love your description and the way everything flows smoothly. I didn't spot any mistakes which is a huge plus, It's definitely something that has grabbed my attention and held my interest. All in all it's a good piece, good job

@ Arablest
I promise you'll be happy with it :3

A little sad. But looking forward to see how it will evolve.

Love it so far, it makes really eager to read more. Please update soon!! =)

Love it so far, it makes really eager to read more. Please update soon!! =)

Im working to get more up! Im just struggling to decide which direction I want to take this...Lol

More soon I promise!
Love

Pretty good update. Though there's still not much I'm still curious to see the relationship between the vampire and Maria. I wonder if she's actually turned full vampire or if she's somewhere in a half state where she wants blood but still retains some kind humanity. Or is it only in dreams? Hmm. . .

TO ALL OF THOSE WHO SUBSCRIBED:
*bows* I thank you.
I ended up rewriting and combing chapter 3 and 4 so make sure you read that before moving on to the next chapter.
And I also apologize about all the rewrites, I just decided that what i did with it, will make the story more interesting!

Thank you so much! Ill try and keep your interest!
:)

This story has piqued my interest. A very good start. I'll keep my eye on this one.