To Walk in His Shoes - Comments

Another.

dude you actually have to update now

Can't wait to read more!! I really find this story intriguing, updates soon!! :D

This is so easy to read and yet it's so full of awesome characters and a dynamic storyline that goes beyond the whole cliche "boy-and-girl-hate-each-other" plot that's so common. I truly like every character, even if Keith can be a butt sometimes. I can't wait to see where this is going, and keep up the awesome work! :)

Condolences to your cousin, Allie.

Even though this story hasn't been updated in a while and I honestly forgot (somewhat) the characters, I still believe this story still has that potential and I just cant' wait for you to update soon.

UPDATE NOW, ALLIE, NOW.

I really like the new layout! It's super cute and really adds to the story.
Loved the last chapter and I didn't think it was crappy at all. Especially the ending.
Please update soon!

I like the layout. (: Very cute!

Keith seemed actually likable in this chapter, though he was drunk. XD

Update soon??

I love the new (?) layout!! Super cute!
I love how we got to see the nicer side of Keith in this chapter. Even if he was drunk.

AH, KEITH IS A POKEMON FAN. Anyway, I've gone from CUIY to this, Allie. You're fucked, now update. c:

Overall your update was good- it did feel a little slow and uneventful but stories can't be super exciting all the time, hahaha. I can't wait to see what happens next!

The first part of your update wasn't my favorite. Although I did look forward to the last part of the chapter. There wasn't any action, but it was enough to keep me smiling to myself.

There were a few grammar mistakes, so maybe you should look over this chapter again. Despite that, everything is going smoothly and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Just found this story and I love it!
It's really good and I love reading stories about 2 main characters (boy and girl) having a long feud and hating each-other.

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I love the story facts at the end of each chapter, so please keep doing that!!!

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Keith is a jerk, but an interesting character, who I look forward to reading more about.

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I also hope that Kat (can I call her that?) goes to that party, but I have a feeling she will.

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Update soon!!

I love the way you write and I'm sure that this story will unfold perfectly. Hope you update soon!

You're style of writing in this story is easy-going. I love how you describe the setting and how things are going between the present and the past. You manage to include the history of Keith in this chapter which I very much appreciate.

I don't really enjoy reading about how Katrina seems to know everything about Keith. Maybe it's just me but it always seems that she knows him and expects him to do particular things. This is only an opinion and I think I'm judging too early but that's how I feel. I might feel different in the succeeding chapters.

As always, you left me with a cliff-hanger at the end. I'm seriously looking forward to the party if Katrina is coming (and I hope she will).

You should update :D I love this story too much for you to let it go!

I'm glad you updated! I loved the story fact too :)

Okay so I honestly adore this story to no end. You are SUCH a gifted writer and you have just this sense of sheer talent. While reading it I was like "Okay, find something constructive to say.... be a good reader, find something they could work on....." But I couldn't. Your story is perfection beyond belief and I cannot wait until you update, I will absolutely cry if you stop writing this story ;) God Bless!!

Olivia

This story is going to be pretty amazing, I bet.

Update some more? :)

I really like how this story has started and really like how you write :)