Save Me With a Song - Comments

@ BlancoLobo
If you say so bro. Though I think it differs from, person to person. XD

@ twejacobbr
Uh thanks. I wasn't really writing it in anyway, glad it's good.

@ Tipsy
I don't think cute s the right word for his dad.

Lol, that was fun. I bet the girl was Eliza...or so I hope XD And I somehow loved Jake's dad. He was cute haha

Love it! Really doo!! =) They will be ssooooo cute together! And I really enjoy how you keep developing the characters little by little! Wonderful!

@ Tipsy
He is horrible. And really? We grew up together so I didn't notice.

I'd say this was the best chapter till now. Your writing style resembles Leo's a lot XD And I hate that dad. He sucks >:(

@ Tipsy
Okay, thanks.

@ BlancoLobo
And when did I say that? I wouldn't be reading if it wasn't interesting.

@ Tipsy
So it wasn't interesting?

@ BlancoLobo
No problem. Anything's acceptable till its interesting to read

@ Tipsy
I was going to wait till he actually started so she could play in her band . . . . .sorry.

Come on! They should meet already

@ Tipsy
Thanks. >/////<

@ twejacobbr
I will try!

First stories are always rough, so no worries! =) But I really am enjoying this storyy! I like the whole song idea too! Keep it up! =)

Aw, Jonah is adorable<3 I'm beginning to like Eliza. Keep up the great work! :)

@ Tipsy
Uh thank you. I hope I can write a good story.

Hello there! First of all, the layout is quite good, so nice work on that. The story has a good start, although i do agree with Hellia that it felt...kinda cut off. Like the bad dad's (i think he was demonstrated bad...?) treatment of the girl felt just out of the blue. I hope you understand...Overall, it was a nice start and a promising work. I think there's a problem with punctuation's in two lines but that's very fine if the story is good :) I hope you update soon! Good luck because it's awesome for your first work.

@ Hellia
Thanks!