OMFG that was just evil of you, ha-ha. I'm definitely loving Grant even if he is an asshole, and Flynn's character definitely has me hooked. This is very quickly addicting to be honest. UPDATE SOON!
Ah, Flynn! That was terrible...but then again, Grant is an asshole. Your writing was far from terrible though. Even though it was your first time writing like that, it was great. And a shit-ton more realistic than a lot of gay sex scenes in stories. I mean, your main point with it was the not using lube aspect making it ridiculously painful, and that's the part that's usually messed up/excluded the most. So phenomenal first sex scene, deary! Great job on this chapter. I'm so sucked into this right now
Oh God, I love this! I'm a sucker for the asshole type of guy, so I'm super excited for this story. This just seems like it's going to be really great :D