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  • ginger

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    I miss your stories, I really do ):
    This one was so promising, and was such a refreshing read! Come back, love.

    (:
    December 28th, 2013 at 11:22pm
  • M12798501R

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    Come back;)
    August 22nd, 2013 at 01:06pm
  • wutheringheightsfan

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    I'm new, but I love this story. You are a great writer, I love the flashbacks. I can't wait for you to update it.
    July 9th, 2013 at 05:16am
  • clo_87

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    Will there be more soon?? Please please! Oh i love it so...
    June 8th, 2013 at 10:13am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    Oooohhh UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
    May 30th, 2013 at 07:18pm
  • nothingpersonal10

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    Aww please update:) I love this story line
    May 27th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    Such a hot chapter (: I still don't know if I would forgive him though... I mean eight months.. When you think about it, it is such a long time! haha but I still LOVE this chapter, and I love Pilars little actions and comments about Tommy! ;P Thanks for updating so soon! <3

    --Hannah!(:
    May 18th, 2013 at 08:15pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Awwwww Tommy loves "me" oh man I definitely forgive him but I should threaten him the next time he leaves and doesn't call or email me I'm goin to kill him, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    May 18th, 2013 at 07:39pm
  • clo_87

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    This is so great... gosh i love it.
    Just cant wait for more, thank you so so much!!
    May 18th, 2013 at 02:01pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    I'm so glad you updated! (: This was my favorite chapter so far, and I think it's because we get to see a piece of sweet Tommy <3 But I also LOVE cocky Tommy too! Update often please (: (:

    --Hannah!
    May 18th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love Tommy he was really sweet in this chapter anyhoo great chapter dearie can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    May 17th, 2013 at 09:55pm
  • nothingpersonal10

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    Please update!
    May 16th, 2013 at 03:42am
  • MoMo_92

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    This story is awesome, I'm enjoying the fact tht a reader has a chance to be the main girl and to be with Tommy very interesting i like tht anyhoo great chapters can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    May 1st, 2013 at 07:42am
  • Hannah1007700

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    I love Tommy's smug attitude and how it really gets under people's skin :) hahaha Very cute chapter!
    April 27th, 2013 at 06:56pm
  • ginger

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    I don't know how you manage to write such enticing material every time, but I can't stop reading. Another fantastic story, please keep it up. I'm loving it!
    April 27th, 2013 at 05:19am
  • nothingpersonal10

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    This is so cute!! Please update soon
    April 27th, 2013 at 04:36am
  • clo_87

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    Oh i really like this!!
    Super excited to see where it goes...
    Love the anticipation, and everyone is so well-written!
    Cant wait for more :)
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:43pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    I totally agree, this has a lot of potential! And I too, am very excited to see where this goes. I'm really big on first person and not to many people do that which is kind of sad, but thats what makes this stand out to me even more!! (: Update soon please! PS I wouldn't let him off the hook so quickly either ;)
    April 24th, 2013 at 04:07am
  • Untidaled.

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    Hey, I really like this! It's got a lot of potential. I'm excited to see where you take this :)
    April 19th, 2013 at 03:47am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    I'm not huge on first person, but i genuinely like this. Keep it up and lets see where this goes!
    April 19th, 2013 at 01:10am
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