Mirrors - Comments

@ jeunes.de.coeur
Yeah I noticed those vibes too. She really needs to think things through and make up her mind.

Wow, this was kind of a sad chapter :'( like, it's great and you're a fab writer, but it really does feel like it's the end. I'm excited for her lunch date with Amelia though. And Avery seems like she's really unsure about her decision, like, you get those vibes from the beginning of the chapter and she seems off when she talks to hudson...

@ bxgurl95
I know how you feel girl. :(

She can't and she won't delete his number, she loves him to much.
I'm hoping that soon she goes to see Christian.
Plus, I have a feeling that her lunch with Amelia with have something to do with Christian, I just think that Amelia is going to bring him up.
Overall, great chapter! I love your writing so much!
Update as soon as possible pleaseeeee! <3 <3 xoxo

I'm sensing this coming to a close :'(
She can't delete the number because SHE'S IN LOVE WITH HIM
That bar seems to inspire some outlandish behavior, can't wait to see what happens next.

@ CatSizzle
For sure, for sure. Well i think right now she's just thinking about her babys future, even though she doesn't know who the father is. (i think that whole talk/speech thing to her baby was super sweet but it also gave us (the readers) a glimpse into her true feelings for the future). But yeah, it is abrupt to just leave to london, but not gonna lie, it's kind of exciting. lol, for me anyway!

@ halcyon.paradise
you're welcome! I love your stories and your style of writing! #talented

@ jeunes.de.coeur
I understand what you mean completely, But it just upset me that she just makes decisions to make others happy. As well as running away from her problems. What she needs to do is think over everything ALONE with nobody telling her what to do, but being with her family won't help that either. So her rash decision by moving to London isn't the brightest idea right now.

@ jeunes.de.coeur
THANK YOU! haha, writing this story is so hard, especially to not be biased with the characters. I appreciate your feedback <3

@ CatSizzle
Yeah I get where you're coming from, but the way I see it is that her 1st priority and responsibility is to her husband. Maybe she's wanting to make her marriage work cause she sees that her parent's have been happilly married all those years and she wants that too. (I'm thinking about Eric too)
lol, but I don't know! i hope we can see more with the updates as to what happens. maybe I'll change my mind about everythng...

He is a great guy, but not the guy for her. They rushed into their relationship, their marriage. She needed to make her own decisions but that didn't mean run away from the problems she had. We don't know if Hudson nor Christian is the father and if Christian is the father, I don't think that is right by her leaving just like that.

Wow! I stayed up all night last night reading the first two stories, and spent like, ALL day reading this one! It's soooo good! Like, I know how everyone is ripping on Avery about how she keeps going back to Hudson, and though christian is super cute and everything, hudson is really amazing! (why can't i find a guy like that? lol).
I for one love him. He really is good for her, and he is trying!

Running away from her problems like always...

She's such a coward

@ CatSizzle
Yes #independentwoman

@ bxgurl95
I totally agree with you 100%

I loved the speech she was giving to her child, how much she loves him already. Even if everything is so hard right now for her. Hudson is a great guy and don't get me wrong I like him but not for her, Christian understands her and loves her like nobody else can, they fell in love with each other because it grew from a mature, loving friendship. It wasn't hurried like her and Hudson's love. Overall I'm loving the story so far, I also think that she needs to make her own decisions and not the men in her life.

That speech was so cute. I really want her to stay in New York, it's where her family is and she loves it and she really got her own writing. Maybe getting away for a week or so would help her. She clearly can't choose right now between the two of them (even though I think Christian would raise Hudson's child and love it like his own). I think she's not giving herself enough realization that she FELL IN LOVE WITH CHRISTIAN I would love if it was Christian. I don't think it is, but a girl can dream can't she :)

Nooooo she needs to go see Christian. :/

@ bxgurl95
Thank you! That means a lot to me <3