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  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ Bdagurl & @ Matt Sanders;

    The alternate version is in progress, it's called Wong Side of Heaven, feel free to check it out!
    September 24th, 2013 at 11:04pm
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    Awh I wanted to cry when he told her that he couldn't do it and hmm, alternate version sounds good
    September 24th, 2013 at 10:34pm
  • Bdagurl

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    Would love to see the alternative version!!
    September 19th, 2013 at 08:08am
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    @ xMandiblesx
    It's the festival. It has nothing to do with Avenged, they have no control over the festival. Which suddenly changed the rules. I'm irritated. But whatever. I'll stand at that stage from 11 am till 8:40pm when they come on if I have to in order to get good pix. Fuck that.

    And to think... The Hall Pass was supposed to just be a one shot. Aren't you glad my brain is insane? Anyway, the first part to the alternate version is up. It's basically a here's where things changed from the other story chapter (At Michelle's baby shower). Chapter one skips 16 years into the future.
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:07am
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    Dude...what's this I hear about no cameras? There is no way that my first Avenged Concert ever will I not be able to take pictures!! This makes me angry lol.

    Anyway...I keep putting off commenting this even though I read it like once you had posted the last chapter. I've just been...bleh because I always get sad when great stories come to an end. I know you have the alternate version but I like the way this ended. This whole story really was amazing. All the relationships and how they came to be. Even the details you used for the kids and their names. All so wonderful and interesting. Mr. Green
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:03am
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    @ Embracing Shadows
    You lucky :( haha maybe you'll get a idea for a story well your there :D I love your stories :P
    I wish I could see them live, their music gives me ideas for poems :)
    September 15th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ CrazyPebbles21
    I plan on blogging all about it... Hopefully, since they banned cameras, I'll get close enough to use my phone without people's heads and arms being in the way... Or getting stuck in a circle pit... In This Moment totally had circles pits this morning and I barely got out of the way in time. It was insane. Shinedown rocked it. I just got home. Tomorrow is gonna be awesome. Halestorm, Five Finger Death Punch and AVENGED!!
    September 15th, 2013 at 06:57am
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    @ Embracing Shadows
    I wish I knew their tour dates every time I look it up the Internet shows me the old tour dates :(

    Can you tell me how it goes please I just love them :) I want them to come to Virginia so bad
    September 15th, 2013 at 02:09am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ CrazyPebbles21
    And tomorrow... I see Avenged. Too bad they decided last minute no cameras are allowed :( I'm gonna have to turn my phone off to save the battery so I can take pix when they play now. Oh well. It'll be amazing regardless.
    September 15th, 2013 at 02:01am
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    @ Embracing Shadows
    Yay :)
    September 14th, 2013 at 07:59pm
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    @ CrazyPebbles21
    The first part of it (Wrong Side of Heaven) is up. It mostly goes over what happens at the beginning of Life, Unexpected, but how things go at Michelle's baby shower are altered, setting the stage for the story.
    September 14th, 2013 at 07:27pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I wouldn't mind reading the alternative :)
    I loved this story :)
    September 14th, 2013 at 09:25am
  • Skullchic

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    I wanna see the alternative!!!
    September 14th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • Syn4Life

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    Loved it, but would like to see the alternative
    September 13th, 2013 at 08:41pm
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    @ megapixeln
    I'm glad you enjoyed this story, however, as the title of the chapter references, that was the epilogue. So there will be no more updates. I may be writing an alternate version where Matt & Beka are not together though.
    September 13th, 2013 at 04:01pm
  • HukeLemmings

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    I love it! I have so much feelings inside when I read it and when I stop they are just exploding! Please update soon Very Happy
    September 13th, 2013 at 01:43pm
  • BoyCrazzyEmo2

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    i love this story! i am kinda of carious to see how things would be if val was still alive && Matt's kids don't know they have a sibling Which results in crazy teenage kids hijinks!!
    September 13th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • CountSynula

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    I'm in agony omg........
    September 13th, 2013 at 03:05am
  • Waking-The-Fallen

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    Feel so bad for Beka after everything she alone. WTF! Is Matt thinking! I understand he feels bad about Val death but to leave Beka with three kids because of it and not wanna see them. So, disappointed in Matt right now. Please don't end it there, maybe a Epilogue I have to know what happens to Beka and the kids.
    September 13th, 2013 at 12:25am
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    @ readergirl
    ... Maybe that's how it ends.
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:50pm