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  • Matt Sanders;

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    Oh my gosh no!! Not Owen and as much as I don't like her, not Val either! Ugh I can't wait to see what you have planned and I just hope that this doesn't make Matt go back to Val, Bekah doesn't need that!
    July 15th, 2013 at 05:34pm
  • Myl

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    Oh well again an Amazing you chapter

    I am still for Val ... Sorry. Can't help it feel so bad for her how matt Treats her
    I hope. He will see how it is to her

    It's so hard to Read the story I hope to You will update soon this is killing me
    July 15th, 2013 at 05:33pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I had missed this story
    The ending made me think about seize the day video with the truck hitting Val
    Update soon
    I loved this chapter
    Can't wait to see what happens
    And it's not Beka's fault that Val gave Matt a hall path and he took it, yes she knew he was married but Val told Matt to have sex with someone else and Matt chose Beka and no fan would say no to having sex with M.Shadows I wouldn't haha :D
    July 15th, 2013 at 11:22am
  • the-vampiress-angel

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    I found this story a while back but only got a chance to read it this past week and I'm so glad I found this gem! You have this written really well, you haven't got either Val or Beka looking like the bad guys, but at the same time I dislike them both as well as love them!

    Part of me would love to see Matt back with Val just to see how the plot with Beka would work. But seriously no matter what way this story goes I will definitely keep reading! Well done on this amazing story, I can't wait for more!
    June 30th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • jessx3

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    I absolutely adore this story! I seriously cannot wait to see what happens next. I can't help myself, I actually feel a little for Val because she still loves Matt but she can't seem to grasp the fact that she can't go back on what she says when she doesn't get her way. If she really didn't want him to be with Beka, she shouldn't have come up with the hall pass idea in the first place. I'm a little worried about what will happen in the next chapter though...
    June 19th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I love this story :)
    It's just amazing :D
    Can't wait to see what happens
    I'm happy Matt didn't let Val kiss him even if be wanted to miss her back
    Update soon
    June 12th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • CountSynula

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    Yay! I loved this update. Eh I just feel kind of conflicted...because you know I'm not crazy about Val in general, but....I think about what if I was her and Matt had done all that. What if it was just a normal non famous couple who was going through stuff like that too? I mean...the thing is though...Val was retarded and told him to have a free night without even fucking thinking it through or meaning it so she was childish for that and has to own up to the consequences. Sigh. For some reason I feel dread when I think of the next chapter lol.
    June 12th, 2013 at 04:36am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ Matt Sanders;
    Yep. *points at brain* this is where the magic happens.
    June 12th, 2013 at 03:30am
  • Myl

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    Ahhh I still can't help to feel for Val
    The actions she did yeah but I guess we all would make not logical decisions in a situation like that...

    @embracing shadows
    Can't say it enough what an excellent writer you are
    And thank you for your frequent updates
    June 12th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Awwwh it makes me happy that this was a sweet chapter, although Val is so inl ove with him but all of this was her fault and now I can't wait to read more and to see where you are going with this. Your brain is like one fo these magic writing machines!!
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:51am
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    Awwwh it makes me happy that this was a sweet chapter, although Val is so inl ove with him but all of this was her fault and now I can't wait to read more and to see where you are going with this. Your brain is like one fo these magic writing machines!!
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:51am
  • Princess Ulani

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    Amazing!!! Truly this story is a piece of art and I can't imagine anything quite like this. Please update becasue I don't know how much longer I can last without this beautiful story. :) :) :)
    June 10th, 2013 at 08:57pm
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ Myl
    She didn't go off the birth control till after. If he hadn't skipped using a condom several times, it wouldn't have mattered. HIS actions gave her the opportunity. There isn't anything sneaky about that. It isn't like she told him she was on birth control and asked him not to use a condom. She was on birth control. He CHOSE not to use a condom. She never actually even said she was ON birth control, if you re-read it. She did say that two forms were better than one, but she never actually said she was using one.

    I don't see how her stopping her birth control to give his fuck-up a chance to result in something is being sneaky.

    And thanks :D It's always nice to hear that people like the crazy things that my brain comes up with.
    June 7th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • Myl

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    @ Embracing Shadows
    Lol
    But didnt she stop w birth control to get pregnant
    Or did i misunderstood that

    Anyways you are a grat writer
    Fantastic job
    XO
    June 7th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • Embracing Shadows

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    @ Myl
    I have to disagree with you. She wasn't being sneaky. She was on birth control till after he failed to use a condom. There isn't anything sneaky about that, just wishful thinking and giving HIS mistake a chance to result in something.
    June 6th, 2013 at 03:26pm
  • CountSynula

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    Oooh great chapter! Hahaha. Eh...I mean...the whole situation is messed up but Valary did do this to herself. You can't lock a lion in a lamb factory and not expect damage control lol.
    June 6th, 2013 at 05:17am
  • Myl

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    Im always looking forward to the next chapter
    Thanks for a great emotional touching story

    I hope Val & Matt stay together
    First love always count. Matt is just confused sbout being a dad again and pure lust...
    But since the beginning even though most of the readers love Bekka., from the beginning Matt was wrong w huis actions but Bekka iss sneaky from the beginning and all planned it out. I say stick w Val ;)
    June 5th, 2013 at 05:09pm
  • angelbyyourside

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    Owen is such a sweetheart!

    This chapter had me on a kiddie roller coaster--gentle waves of emotion that went up and down and sideways. :)

    Love how your writing keeps emotions flowing. Sometimes steady. Other times rushing in. It's not tiring to read--unlike some stories/authors that keep you on edge the whole time that somewhere in the middle you just wanna throw up.
    June 5th, 2013 at 04:47am
  • CrazyPebbles21

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    I loved it
    When Val told Owen to love his sisters and brother no matter what it sounded like she was going to leave and not come back, I know that's not what it meant Haha
    Update soon
    Can't wait to see what happens
    Amazing chapter
    June 5th, 2013 at 04:26am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    It's getting deep now and well I hope that Val doesn't withdraw her petition! I mean I know it's probably going to have a twist ending, but I can't wait to read more!
    June 5th, 2013 at 12:53am