Oh my gosh no!! Not Owen and as much as I don't like her, not Val either! Ugh I can't wait to see what you have planned and I just hope that this doesn't make Matt go back to Val, Bekah doesn't need that!
I had missed this story The ending made me think about seize the day video with the truck hitting Val Update soon I loved this chapter Can't wait to see what happens And it's not Beka's fault that Val gave Matt a hall path and he took it, yes she knew he was married but Val told Matt to have sex with someone else and Matt chose Beka and no fan would say no to having sex with M.Shadows I wouldn't haha :D
I found this story a while back but only got a chance to read it this past week and I'm so glad I found this gem! You have this written really well, you haven't got either Val or Beka looking like the bad guys, but at the same time I dislike them both as well as love them!
Part of me would love to see Matt back with Val just to see how the plot with Beka would work. But seriously no matter what way this story goes I will definitely keep reading! Well done on this amazing story, I can't wait for more!
I absolutely adore this story! I seriously cannot wait to see what happens next. I can't help myself, I actually feel a little for Val because she still loves Matt but she can't seem to grasp the fact that she can't go back on what she says when she doesn't get her way. If she really didn't want him to be with Beka, she shouldn't have come up with the hall pass idea in the first place. I'm a little worried about what will happen in the next chapter though...
I love this story :) It's just amazing :D Can't wait to see what happens I'm happy Matt didn't let Val kiss him even if be wanted to miss her back Update soon
Yay! I loved this update. Eh I just feel kind of conflicted...because you know I'm not crazy about Val in general, but....I think about what if I was her and Matt had done all that. What if it was just a normal non famous couple who was going through stuff like that too? I mean...the thing is though...Val was retarded and told him to have a free night without even fucking thinking it through or meaning it so she was childish for that and has to own up to the consequences. Sigh. For some reason I feel dread when I think of the next chapter lol.
Awwwh it makes me happy that this was a sweet chapter, although Val is so inl ove with him but all of this was her fault and now I can't wait to read more and to see where you are going with this. Your brain is like one fo these magic writing machines!!
Awwwh it makes me happy that this was a sweet chapter, although Val is so inl ove with him but all of this was her fault and now I can't wait to read more and to see where you are going with this. Your brain is like one fo these magic writing machines!!
Amazing!!! Truly this story is a piece of art and I can't imagine anything quite like this. Please update becasue I don't know how much longer I can last without this beautiful story. :) :) :)
@ Myl She didn't go off the birth control till after. If he hadn't skipped using a condom several times, it wouldn't have mattered. HIS actions gave her the opportunity. There isn't anything sneaky about that. It isn't like she told him she was on birth control and asked him not to use a condom. She was on birth control. He CHOSE not to use a condom. She never actually even said she was ON birth control, if you re-read it. She did say that two forms were better than one, but she never actually said she was using one.
I don't see how her stopping her birth control to give his fuck-up a chance to result in something is being sneaky.
And thanks :D It's always nice to hear that people like the crazy things that my brain comes up with.
@ Myl I have to disagree with you. She wasn't being sneaky. She was on birth control till after he failed to use a condom. There isn't anything sneaky about that, just wishful thinking and giving HIS mistake a chance to result in something.
Oooh great chapter! Hahaha. Eh...I mean...the whole situation is messed up but Valary did do this to herself. You can't lock a lion in a lamb factory and not expect damage control lol.
Im always looking forward to the next chapter Thanks for a great emotional touching story
I hope Val & Matt stay together First love always count. Matt is just confused sbout being a dad again and pure lust... But since the beginning even though most of the readers love Bekka., from the beginning Matt was wrong w huis actions but Bekka iss sneaky from the beginning and all planned it out. I say stick w Val ;)
This chapter had me on a kiddie roller coaster--gentle waves of emotion that went up and down and sideways. :)
Love how your writing keeps emotions flowing. Sometimes steady. Other times rushing in. It's not tiring to read--unlike some stories/authors that keep you on edge the whole time that somewhere in the middle you just wanna throw up.
I loved it When Val told Owen to love his sisters and brother no matter what it sounded like she was going to leave and not come back, I know that's not what it meant Haha Update soon Can't wait to see what happens Amazing chapter
It's getting deep now and well I hope that Val doesn't withdraw her petition! I mean I know it's probably going to have a twist ending, but I can't wait to read more!