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  • bxgurl95

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    Wow I finally got around to finish reading this. Absolutely GOLD. The writing of the memories, the dialogue, the conflict, the detail just breathtaking. This is an absolute work of art and something that I could only have managed to read in 1 sitting. This is also an alternative to some of the stories I usually read and I'm SO glad I found this. Your work is amazing. I was crying this a baby! Sometimes life does get in the way and you can't just have a cliche happily ever after.
    October 24th, 2013 at 02:23pm
  • alexisrose

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    Wow. Those final two chapters were amazing. I never cry and I sobbed like a baby while reading those two chapters.
    September 20th, 2013 at 09:42am
  • fallingstar2008

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    Wow amazing chapter, the ending of this chapter was so bad. I wish Seattle and Ben could just admit that they have feelings for each other and just be together. Thank you so much for updating. You're an amazing writer and I am obsessed with all of your stories :)
    September 16th, 2013 at 02:56am
  • semisweet.

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    this story makes me so sad. I feel so bad for Seattle. and Ben.
    September 16th, 2013 at 01:21am
  • Sparklingbows

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    Can't wait for an update!!! Mr. Green
    August 1st, 2013 at 06:44am
  • Jess Balz.

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    i'm in love with this. i'm a huge macklemore fan and really happy someone is writing about him! can't wait to see the update. c:
    July 24th, 2013 at 04:08pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Everything about this story I love.
    1) I mean he's scrumptious so yea...
    2) I like the "My City" thing it's clever and cute and it gives the sense that he feels comforted and at home when he's with her.
    3) this story is heart wrenching, it's unfortunate that they can't communicate. I hope he finds out that she knew. (Unless these are all memories hat they are sharing).
    I can't wait for more this story is amazing
    July 18th, 2013 at 04:45am
  • DuckyDuck

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    Please update! I need more of Seattle and Ben!
    July 17th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • Chasey_D

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    AAAAH she can't die though :((
    July 16th, 2013 at 04:29am
  • innbetweendays

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    omg. OMG. omfg.
    I am absolutely in love with this story!
    I love Ben to bits and I'm so happy you are writing a fanfic about him. <3
    July 14th, 2013 at 05:59am
  • semisweet.

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    I don't even really listen to macklemore but I'm in love with this story
    July 14th, 2013 at 01:32am
  • Steffi3991

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    I really like it, but will you continue with it?
    July 9th, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • Chasey_D

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    LOVE this! update pleaseeee!
    June 25th, 2013 at 05:08am
  • E.Massonne

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    This story, beautifully written. Please update soon!
    June 6th, 2013 at 08:47pm
  • WtftXDino

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    My gosh.. your writing.. it's amazing.
    I'll admit, I actually cried during the first two chapters.
    I absolutely cannot wait for your update. ^_^
    June 1st, 2013 at 03:41pm
  • WtftXDino

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    June 1st, 2013 at 03:41pm
  • WtftXDino

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    June 1st, 2013 at 03:41pm
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    June 1st, 2013 at 03:41pm
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    June 1st, 2013 at 03:41pm
  • TheCrimsonRose

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    Please update this again soon:) I really like it so far! Mr. Green
    May 30th, 2013 at 04:06am
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