Pretty Girl - Comments

So, I disappeared off of Mibba for awhile.. Then came back to these challenges they had put up. This week we have to write a review on our favorite Mibba story.. & I'd have to say this is mine. Though, I'm just finishing it for the first time tonight. I am so glad I went through my recs to find this & finish reading it. I think it is one of the most beautiful & tragic stories I have ever read.
It breaks my heart that you ever had to go through any of these things. Though I'm hoping Teddy is real, even if that isn't his real name, & that he's giving you everything you need to go on. I sincerely hope that you are doing so much better now. ❤️

Love the endng :D

this is sooooooo emotional and deep and sad and too goood please keep writing when you feel like it but sooon

SHE LOVES HIM!! SHE ADMITED HER LOVE, eep!! love this

Yay, Teddy is back, I hope that claire realizes she loves him so they can be togethet. Love the updates!

I love this story so much I really hope you update soon.

I really like this story, so glad it was updated

@ itsmorgan
Im sorry that this story is real...im so sorry

@ onlyme_1998
thanks! I hope I'll be able to get back to this story too. It's so realistic because it is real, this life Claire is living has happened. It's happening now.

I am enjoying where this story is going, I kind of want clair to end up dating teddy amd not the other girl... I love how this is so realistic unlike other stories I have read!:) I am totally in love with this story, hope writing will come easier to you again

Adria should.. Like, back off. Or I will throat punch her! (:

Firstly, I think you're an amazing writing. You have a natural flow and way of forming a story making the characters come to life. This story obviously has a lot of emotion attached to it and that comes across brilliantly.
From a writing point of view, I maybe would have liked to see the paced slowed down a little bit to allow the reader to take everything in and add more detail so we could picture the characters from right at the start.
I would also like to have seen longer chapters. However, its so beautifully done on a topic that can be so emotional to yourself and others and I can see this really helping get your thoughts out there and allowing others to relate with you. That connection with the reader is something so hard to achieve and I really think you managed it.

I'm crying because this is so beautiful ♡

This story is so lovely.

This story is beautiful yet some what tragic, im so sorry you went through some similar things, I hope you're okay. I really like the roll teddy plays and I hope Clair and him will always be friends and maybe more.(;
Over all, amazig story, I love it

I think that Claire is probably, most definitely NOT fat. -.-" And that everyone just likes to be mean to her. "Beauty is not defined by the size of your jeans", a quote by Jack Barakat from All Time Low. That's what I would tell her. And anyone else who reads this and thinks they're fat. It doesn't matter how big your boobs are, how big your butt is, or how skinny your waist line is. You'll always be beautiful to me. ❤

Wow.. This is good.. I mean, I don't really know what to say. I don't want to be like update soon and all that.. Not with it meaning so much to you. It's like I can feel your emotions. You're only two chapters in and it's already gave me some crazy goosebumps. It's really good though, so keep writing.

I really like this, it's so emotional and real. Definitely can't wait to read more. And I'm sorry that you went through similar things. (You said so in the Authors Note) :/

DAMN Update more!! :D