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  • rachie-smachie

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    i cant even read the text. its all int one line. fix it? it looks like a good sotry
    August 5th, 2013 at 09:43pm
  • znickerz

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    @ XxChErRyCOkexX
    Wow thanks! I really appriate your help! Mr. Green
    May 6th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • BitterSweetSymphony

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    Wow, okay. It's [ I ] [ / I ] only with no spaces in them, and text in between. Like this!
    May 6th, 2013 at 05:40am
  • BitterSweetSymphony

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    and the same thing, only with a b for bold. :P

    I really like the story line, but the way it's bunched up and not in paragraphs kinda looks like a big mess. And I noticed "sight" a lot, but I'm assuming it's sigh?

    Message me if you'd like any extra help with your writing, okay? I'd love to help (:
    May 6th, 2013 at 05:38am
  • Flowers

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    this is one of my most favorites I'm subscribed to
    May 5th, 2013 at 05:17pm
  • Flowers

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    I love this soooo much
    April 30th, 2013 at 11:36pm
  • resplendently

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    I just found this story, and I love it. Sorry, I have no idea how to fix your layout. I can't wait until your next update. <3
    April 30th, 2013 at 08:10pm
  • Jalesa Kitty

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    omg I love this story so much it's so amazing , you're gonna update soon right ?
    April 27th, 2013 at 01:20pm
  • Flowers

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    updateeee more i really like this story
    April 26th, 2013 at 04:11am
  • znickerz

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    @ EthaHanner
    really? yayy
    Clap
    April 23rd, 2013 at 02:43pm
  • EthaHanner

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    idek this is one of my favs in my subs :3 cute slash <3
    April 23rd, 2013 at 03:32am
  • Flowers

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    omg great story it needs like 500000 recommendations upset more
    April 22nd, 2013 at 03:17am
  • EthaHanner

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    Moreeeee :3
    April 21st, 2013 at 01:57pm
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