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  • laredo.

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    What I really liked about this story was how short the chapters were. I don't mean that in a bad way, but what I mean is that you packed so much emotion into each one that it was beautiful.

    You wrote the characters up so well, and they're entirely relatable yet different. I love that. I found that I felt like a little child reading this, because it was simple and beautiful in the way children's fairy tales are. Honestly this story kind of made my day. You write things poetically, and I admire that. Well done, you deserve the attention this story got. Cute
    August 5th, 2013 at 05:26pm
  • silk tea.

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    omfg i hate how perfect this is . damn you
    May 14th, 2013 at 11:26pm
  • Johnny Ringo

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    This is beautiful. I love it so much. Tragedy is my favorite genre of writing, and you make it so perfect. Cute
    May 9th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • big bad wolf.

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    Lovely...
    May 8th, 2013 at 12:37am
  • oh bear

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    This line is perfecto.
    They appealed more to him now than they ever did at age nine.

    Also. Love how they're both uncomfortable under different circumstances and yet they already have their differences like he can cope with not having the stars and she can't sleep when she doesn't have her map/photo. ♥ Wish I could re-recc.
    May 5th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • hearts;

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    This is really good writing, I can definitely visualize her room. I can't wait to see more about these two. :)
    May 3rd, 2013 at 08:46pm
  • silk tea.

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    yes to all.
    May 2nd, 2013 at 04:02am
  • elleirarenlle

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    you've got me subscribed:) sounds interesting what's next?:D
    May 1st, 2013 at 10:04am
  • oh bear

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    I think you have a specialty for writing chapter ones. Also pls continue this because the last paragraph left me WANTING MORE ok. File Subbed (and also subbed to your NaNo).
    April 29th, 2013 at 02:29pm
  • loveupsidedown

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    This is really well written. And it sounds great. You make it sound really interesting.
    It's really good.
    April 29th, 2013 at 06:18am
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