You're My White Dragon Fly - Comments

Mrs.AlvaBiersack (100)

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@ Zahizzle6
Yeah I'm sorry. I just don't have the time to write. Actually I do. But, I'm to lazy to sit and write a whole thing out

April 1st, 2014 at 04:14am

Zahizzle6 (100)

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Eeep missing this story! ;-;

March 25th, 2014 at 03:33am

andybsgrapedog (100)

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Please update soon

June 23rd, 2013 at 04:56am

andybsgrapedog (100)

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Please update soon

May 18th, 2013 at 07:32pm

Unexpected. (100)

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With the cliff hanger I can't wait until the next chapter!

April 28th, 2013 at 04:40am

Mrs.AlvaBiersack (100)

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@ TeamTonyVincent
I Hadn't meant it to be that way as I Have not read her chapters for a couple days since i was busy with my school work. I Wanted them to be like twins and they had the same kind of names so i picked two names I knew matched off the top of my head. And I'm Taking mine in a whole different direction than Fallencreature's i'm sure so do not worry about where its going just enjoy.

April 24th, 2013 at 09:26pm

ptvjaime (1600)

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I was willing to give this a shot despite the errors, but Sapphire. Really? The same name FallenCreature used for Juliet's brother in her story? Really? It would have been one thing if you'd used Diamond and something else because the tones of both stories are similar as it is, but using the same name is just... Not the least bit creative.

April 24th, 2013 at 08:27pm