CHLOE IS SO ANNOYING UGHHHHH WHAT A BITCH SHE'S MORE OF A FRENEMY and Joey is so adorable omg and i hope Nate traps her in a closet so they can have a serious conversation and then a makeout session (((::::
I'm just now getting around to reading this, and I just wanted to say, I adore it already! It's something that should be made into a rom-com movie! Ugh, it's so cute, haha. (':
I love Nanaja already. She's sarcastic and angsty and everything wrong in the world because she was dealt a shit hand. But him, oooff, he is just swoon-worthy. He's quirky and funny and everything right in the world. So it just makes sense that the two will belong together.
As soon as I'm home from work later, I plan to read the rest of what you have posted! So expect more comments (and longer ones, too, I'm running a bit late, haha) later! <3
lmao she was holding her phone upside though tbh, I'd do the same thing in her situation OMG LMAO THE SEX PART Nate you sly dog. And then he kissed her and she ran away. Man, I can't wait for the next chaaaapter.
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD. I love Naja's witticism and Nate is hOT DAYUM. Where on earth do you find these guys?
Anywho, I actually thought Naja was a God but she was just named after one–which is still cool–and I love that Nate is a famous guy. He could be like Chris Pine or someone.
Yeah, I love this. Naja is great, Nate is hot, and you are wonderful.
omg omg omg I can't express how much I love Naja. This character is perfection and I love the way you described her appearance. She's fantastic and witty.
Nate, ugh, Nate. You handsome handsome being.
I think its so evil that Naja keeps pushing that Joey's gay, but it's hilarious. I like their dynamic.
Hahah and seriously that 'blog post' "Cah-ute!" Loved it.
I don't like Chloe. She can pipe the f down.
OMG HE ASKED HER TO GO TO THE PARK. He's so straight forward and sudden. Take control, Nate, take the wheel!
I seriously love this story with my every being. It's so lighthearted and wonderful and geniune. New favorite story <3 Update soon!
i am excited and ugh Chloe like no and I just realised that Nate and Naja have similar sounding names sort of and it's really cute but I can't think of a ship name except for like Natja LOL sorry
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grabbing my wrist and dragging me upwards in such hast that — I think "hast" is supposed to be "haste".
Okay but seriously CAN CUTE STUFF HAPPEN AT THE PARK ALREADY but ugh I bet Chloe's going to blow the hell up seriously girl take a chill pill
I don't think I like Chloe omg like bitch u don't just push my girl Naja around nuh uh you don't have the right to do that nope I AM SO HAPPY THEY LEFT CHLOE BEHIND OMG LIKE THANK GOD
I agree with Nate, Chloe is a bit to much. No wonder the ditched her. But Nate and Naja seem perfect for each-other. I just hope they realize it soon and start dating. :)
This story is wonderful - it's a nice lighthearted read that has a hint of seriousness in it but not in your face. It's the perfect lighthearted - it's not too fluffy yet not too serious. I love how Naja treats Nate...she doesn't care that he's a movie star, she treats him the same as she treats everyone else. I think that's why Nate likes her; he needs a break from his celebrity life and she's perfect for the job.
I am so incredibly glad that you suggested this story to me! It's awesome so far. I really enjoy the humor that's in it. And I love how Naja isn't this goddess or something, she's realistic. I also love how you utilized mythology when picking her name - I adore mythology. The fact that Naja is not impressed by this Nate Harding dude in the slightest also makes this great. It's probably shocking to him that she's not falling all over him. And honestly, I wanted to piss myself when she called him the Hamburgler. And when Chloe was talking about him being in town and she would so totally know it was him if she saw him despite sunglasses or whatever made me crack up since he was standing there. The fact that the title is directly related to Naja and Nate is perfect. I love it. This story seriously reminds me of something that I'd be lucky to find on the shelves of a bookstore in the young adult section. I can't wait for more!
Firstly, I just have to say that I love the layout and the rosy border, and how the title fits in with the two characters. I don't know, I just think it's really smart, the way you've tied everything together.
Moving on to the content, this story is hilarious. I love Naja and her wit, and how she reacts with Nate, who sounds like a total cutie by the way. The interactions between all of the characters were hilarious, especially with Chloe + Nate, and Joey + Naja. The comment about the hair gel made me giggle, as well as the boxers with the red hearts comment. Idk what you're on about with 'this story is ridiculous', try this story is amazing and hilarious and I can't wait for more!