A Fading Memory - Comments

I'm just going to say that your writing is absolutely beautiful. I love the way you describe his house as being sort of creepy, with the murky windows and dark look. I did notice quite a few places you missed commas, but it would be easy to fix with a simple read through and edit.
Stella kind of creeps me out, for some reason. Probably just with the comment about the pictures at the end of the first chapter. It sort of worried me because she called them “damaging” which is extremely weird.. This is a great story though and I really enjoyed reading it!

@ AlisonTimeLow
Thank you xx

Asdfghjkl this chapter is perfect

@ AlisonTimeLow
Thank you so much <3 xxx

Oh my god I am in love with this story

@ St. Jimmy
lol thank god you realized before you put the link then

@ RachelCantFly
It's pretty much my worst nightmare

@ St. Jimmy
hahaha I don't think that it would be best for your parents to find out that their daughter has been writing stories about guys in bands through Facebook lol

@ RachelCantFly
Aw thanks <3 I wanted to put a link on my Facebook but I got scared and realised my parents would see it ._.

I swear, more people need to read this <3 aw poor Sean though :( it's bad enough that he messed up with josh, and now he's watching Ian die!

omg as soon as the sexy started I just KNEW something was going to go wrong oh god lol
thank you for updating! <3

OH MY GOD. NO. PLEASE TELL ME HE DID NOT MOAN IAN'S NAME OH MY GOD

@ AlisonTimeLow
Thank you! Updates on everything have sort of stalled cause I'm Beta'ing a 18-something chapter story, but I'll work on it as soon as I can :)

I rrrrreeeeeeeaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyy love this story!! Update soon please ❤❤

First off I really love your layout, the picture in the back really draws my eye. It also really fits in with your summary, I think at least. I think that you have a really unique idea going here and I hope you keep working on it. The summary really drew me in to read more, very good job. I like the way you set up your chapters, everything is neat and spaced out well so it's easy to read. Please update soon :)

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All I can say is that the book is really good. I like they way the title is to the side, It bring out the chapter more. And please go back and edit those mistakes. But good job. I love it

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Firstly the title, I like the way it's simple but yet effective, it drew me in almost straight away.

I think your plot is good, but a little confusing at times, although with saying that, it's still very good. I like your descriptions, they're very interestingly written!

I did however notice some mistakes, both spelling and grammar wise, so watch out for that. Overall, good job!

Hey! I'm here from comment swap :)

First of all, you have a really great way of describing things. The way you described the house gave me a visual of like an old, "stairs that creak," kind of place. I hope that's what you were going for.

Although I'm a bit lost as to what this story is actually about, I'm intrigued about the concept. You've got great characters and I'm sure you'll do very well at developing them.

I did notice a few minor grammar and spelling errors, so a quick read through might fix those, but otherwise nothing too big.

Great job!

@ cyrus barrone
SO IT'S TRUE? I saw them live at big gig ._. It's basically a gig for the Guides and stuff, if you're into the music it's good but if you're not then you can shuffle to the beat and force a smile :/
Number 6 festival up North Wales, only going cause my friend gets free tickets :D

I've never heard of Big Gig before; sorry!! I wouldn't want to go in the put to be honest, seems really scary. JLS ARE NO MORE THOUGH HAHAHAH. Oh what festival?c;

And I totally think that you should make this Smatkins please xx