Saving Alice - Comments

@ onlyme_1998
:)

A drug lord?! Thats a shocker. I like where this is going :)

@ onlyme_1998
Haha, I was hoping it didn't come off as kind of creepy- good to know it didn't.

She came back to find her and thank her that is so sweet

@ BooksAndHockey
Thank you so much! (:

Oh my gosh, you are such a powerful writer! I really enjoyed reading what you've written so far, it's just captivating. I love the first paragraph in the first chapter, you tell us right away what kind of person we are dealing with without directly saying it, which is so cool. I really like how I can picture everything that's going on, too. Oh, and I looove the passage about breaking the mirror, how you describe her reflection without us knowing there is a mirror there. So good! Haha, anyway, be sure to keep writing! I like where it's going. :)

@ onlyme_1998
Thank you, and I plan on it.. as long as this writers block gets the hell away. Hahah.

I really like this story though. Even if its not what you intended for it to be. You should really keep writing this :)