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Loved!

THIS IS THE CUTEST CHAPTER IN EXISTENCE.
I can't imagine a meeting any better than this. It's so Tommy, to me, and I like Roslyn in this because of "plaster a fake smile on my face." Yep.
I'm really excited to see where this goes and how you'll approach either telling the rest of their relationship's history or going back and forth between past and present or what?!?!?!?
OH, and I definitely smiled to myself picturing this at the end: "His hand lightly grasps a hold of my elbow to keep me from walking. He gives me a sheepish smile." SQUEALS

Totally agree with ginger! <3 I love the end of the recent chapter where he's just like... "It's Tommy." Like OMG I can feel that he is smiling too <333

--Hannah!

Totally agree with ginger! <3 I love the end of the recent chapter where he's just like... "It's Tommy." Like OMG I can feel that he is smiling too <333

--Hannah!

Totally agree with ginger! <3 I love the end of the recent chapter where he's just like... "It's Tommy." Like OMG I can feel that he is smilin too <333

--Hannah!

It's been three days. I'm dying here.

:D

I love how well this developing :)

I really really like this take on Tommy. And i really want more :)

I cannot express how anxious I am for the next update!!!! I'm really intrigued for when we'll find out what Roslyn did too, and Tommy's explanation and to see if that helps settle her mind. I also loved their brief sweet moment :')
Interesting drama and update update update! And I do really love how you describe the characters; it is very relatable and real ^,^

I'm very excited about this story!! Somehow, you manage to write the characters in a way that is both relatable and enticing. I was drawn in reading about the drama, curious what their big fight was all about. I was a little disappointed it ended so quickly, but I'm sure there is more to come! Please keep updating! (:

He cheated on her?! But he said she isnt a saint either, I want to know what shes been up too! :P Awww... when they were in the hallway made me sad in a good way, I enjoy the descriptive words it gives me a better picture in my head :D and I didnt know you are the author of "Covet" too!! I was so excited to read that story, no wonder I liked it so much :)

This is incredibly good!

I don't know if this was intentional or if I'm just reading into things too much, but it seems like Roslyn tends to be drawn to atypical characters. Tommy for one, and I think it's interesting how Hannah's behavior would otherwise not be supportive, but Roslyn knows she means well and feels comforted.
I also have to comment on the paragraph about how Roslyn sees Tommy! It made my heart melt, it was written SO well.
I'm anxious/excited for more! ^,^

I totally agree with degxusser , It seems like something he did but theres something else to it! And he must really care if he is trying to fix it so he can't be that much of a monster? Ooooo I'm left so curious :) hahaha

I'm really anxious to find out what happened! It seems like it's something on Tommy's part, but the fact that he's angry and still wanting to try to fix things makes me think there's more to it than just that. And 'monster'?!?!?
Can't wait for updates! (◕‿◕✿)

I'm curious to see what he did, and where this goes.. I will be reading :)

I'm curious to see what he did, and where this goes.. I will be reading :)