The Man in the Iron Mask - Comments

I really hope you update soon I really like this story!

I am loving this story. I also love that despite the fact that Loki told Madeline she means nothing to him, he still comforted her when she was crying. I am very interested to see where you go with their relationship.

SufferingSweetSorrow:

badbadcan't wait for the next! the update was great I want to see what happens so

sorry idk why my post switched where words should be haha

badbadcan't wait for the next! the update was great I want to see what happens so

very unique! great writing, I can't wait for updates!

I'm so sad for her! She lost everything! But I'm also slightly jealous, I wish I could go to Asgard lol
I was wondering when there would be an update, I was getting a little worried! But all is forgiven :) Can't wait to see what else Loki has in store for her..

At the end with Odin, that totally reminded me of the "Norse Crisis Flow Chart", or something like that title, have you seen it? It's awesome, but poor Loki. Anyways, I had a feeling that Loki was going to end up tricking her to Asgard. I want to be mad at him but... he is a trickster

Poor Loki :( Why would SHIELD (just assuming they're behind this, as always) erase Loki's memory? Poor guy...
Anyways, can't wait for another update, as always

THIS IS SO GOOD! Wow, this is so good. I'm sorry that is all I can say right now, I'm so excited for another one!

Oh my, I almost cried when I read about the mask being sown to his freaking face. That's cruel. It's a good detail to put in here though.

This is the only thing that made my life worth living today. Haha, good work :)

Things are getting interesting! :D Can't wait for the next update!

It was worth the wait! I love this story! So happy that you updated it! You're doing a good job at keeping me blin to wait is going to happen, like literally anything could happen and I can't figure out what it is, which is really really nice!

I'm loving this story so much. Loki is my favorite villain eeeeveeeer, and this fan fiction is actually very good so far. I can't wait for more.

oh shit. crap, I feel sorry for Loki, like I want to just reach out and protect him. More soon!

I wonder what Sarah needs to tell Madeline, can't wait to find out :D

This is actually a pretty damn awesome fiction :D I love it a lot, you're doing awesome writing it.

@ j.lynn @ KillJoySynner @ eleanor lyra jones @ DreamtOfYou @ happyface89

Thanks guys :3 Glad to see that others are in love with the Thor 2 trailer too, and also for the completely wrong reason :D

@ The Sun God

Thanks for the feedback :) I'm aware that Loki would need to be more than muzzled, which is something that is going to come up... probably rather soon ;)

Pretty solid story, good characterization and the like. Something I will say is that simply muzzling Loki wouldn't get the job done. In the lore he has magical abilities equal or greater than the mightiest sorcerer in Asgard. So something to think about might be to put him in a room that can nullify magic. Plus SHEILD would have him immobilized to the point where he could blink once an hour if he was being good. Seething I noticed at the end of chapter 3, you put 2 instead of writing it out the sentence had something to do with it being 2 years since something. Just wanted to let you know. But solid story, can't wait to see where it goes. Subscribed.

This makes me Happy. :D Good Job.