Oh my god, FUCK RICHARD. I will kill him. LIKE SERIOUSLY WHY IS HE BEIN SUCH A DICKHOLE. I need something to happen between her and him soon or else I'm going to explode with hate and anger. But I can't tell if by "home" is meant the nasty time or her actually go back to wherever she came from with Johnny. Anyway, I'm so super glad that you've updated frequently this week. ❤ I love this story so much!
Brandon and Rich can 200% suck my dick. I don't get why both of them were being so assy in this chapter. Especially Brandon like damn shut the hell up, give her time to settle in before she searches for work, rudeness. And Rich just needs to calmer down with the blackmail he has against Eleanore if he ain't going to do shit about it. Also known as put the moves on Eleanor. And then we have Johnny in this chapter and ugh, I don't want to have a soft spot for him but Rich annoyed the fuck out of me in this chapter and Johnny was so puppy dog like and vulnerable. It was just too much for me to handle, I'm currently shipping Jonanor, but I'll probably be back to Richanor eventually. Either way, I'm really psyched about this story and to see what you do with it and where it goes. And for Heaven's sake, don't doubt yourself so much. You're doing a wonderful job, I promise you that, dear. :) ❤
Ugh why doesn't this have more recognition? It's perf. I also read your blog and saw this is on the list to be worked on. That makes me very happy. You're a wonderful writer. I'm not even totally sure about Richard yet but I'm already wanting him and Eleanor to have something happen.
@ Hello I love you In the beginning of the chapter Richard first says to her, "Oh Eleanor." And at the end when she's remembering things, that's one of the things she remembers and so she just repeats it in her head and starts imagining things. Sorry, if it was hard to understand.
I'm so confused about the end of the second chapter :s did her and Richard fuck? Or am I just meant to be confused and that bit makes sense in the next chapter? Either way I'm excited for the next chapter and this story(((: