This was so sweet! I loved how you turned the song into a short story! You did a really great job of that! Oh, and you can do italics on Mibba. You need to put: the letter "I" in square bracketsbefore the word (s) you want in italics and then a slash and then the letter "I" at the end. I just figured it out. (thanks to another author on Mibba) P.S. If you don't get it (I kind-of suck at describing things like this) just message me. ;) You should do more short story song things like this! Maybe you could do Taylor Swift's new song "I Knew you Were Trouble"?
OMG I loved this so much :') First of all, I LOVE that song, and secondly, I love your writing style. It kept me hooked til the very end! So sweet, very well done.
Doesn't it? :)