Unexpected - Comments

I like it so far.

Update soon..

@ discoveringclouds
Thanks for your advice, I'll fix it
And why would they take her in?
You'll find out later on in the story, but you can most likely guess xD

You're kind of using present tense so your last line doesn't really flow. She shouldn't know that something big is going to happen. Plus your summary is good and tells us that anyways.

Btw your story is really nice and original. Lol though... His age, what mother randomly just says that to an unconscious girl? Why would she wonder that and what was she thinking before she opened her eyes? Anything? Also it would be good if you put more description. The forest is not 'nothing' it's a lot to take in when you wake up. Especially if you have no memories. It should overwhelm her I think and you can do that with describing the forest in a scary or friendly or whatever way to describe her reaction to it.

Also what does she believe in? Does she remember that? Is she evil/good/loves trust/ sinister?

Keep this going it looks interesting!