Unbroken - Comments

This seems like it will be a really sweet story! I'm really looking forward to reading more of it!

This seems like it will be a really sweet story! I'm really looking forward to reading more of it!

Ooh, this is really good! Excited for more!

I already love this!

Okkkkkkkkk so ; James Neal is one of my favorite player ( and so cute, ahah. ) I feel like i'm going to love this story. Scratch that. I already love it! Nice job for the first chapter. Can't wait for the second chapter. :) Keep going 'cause it's really good. xx

your vero and the real vero are exactly alike! this story is really amazing. please update soon.

@ Dance2muse taaaaaanks for the comment! ;) slowly but surely the backstory will begin to pick up. I'd like to say I'll do daily updates (school is finishing now so I should be able too) but I don't want to guarantee it.

I love this!! Your writing is amazing and your portraying Vero exactly how I think everyone pictures her to be! I'm excited to learn the back story about the father of the baby and to see how and when the team starts getting involved. Can't wait to read what you have coming up next!