Don't Swim Against The Stream - Comments

the ending was perfect too ok bye

this was actually really fucking great to be your first oneshot
The fish was too funny though
I would most def read more of your work

I'm gonna cry again omfg this was so perfect. like the fish tHE FISH. when te fish came out I was rolling. and I'm surprised this I your first oneshot man. my first one suck nipple juice bro I'm telling you. the ending was the best too and this was just all dkishwjakaha. I love you.

MY LOVE FOR THIS IS INFINITE.
I love the ending. Things didn't get awkward and there were no "hidden feelings" and they didn't suddenly fall madly in love. they were just Jack and Alex. wonderful job, my dear!

This is amazing! I love the ending, how they just go back to being the best friends they are :)

it did! i liked how they went back to being best friends after instead of jumping into a relationship for some reason. it made it more casual and i like that. you're writing was good too. descriptive, i could see most (minus the smut because i'm an innocent child) of what was going on. it was really really good doll

@ pshhitshannah
well, it should work now, so yay- I hope you like it!

Thanks! i"m excited to read now.

@ pshhitshannah
yeah, I know- I'm so sorry. I'm working on it! i:

i wanna read this but it doesn't show up when I click on it
:(