Perhaps you could go down the route of recovery and relearning. For example... He could have minimal brain damage and need to relearn how to I don't know use the bathroom. That would actually help bring up a little Brian and Twiggy humor, which is something you don't see often. Just a though. This story is honestly the best. I hope that one day you continue it because it is that good and if you want me to help I would be glad to 
September 14th, 2013 at 11:50pm
