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  • fallingstar2008

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    Great chapter, can't wait to read the next one! And thanks for the shout out :)
    September 12th, 2013 at 04:30am
  • BeautifullyAwestruck

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    @ fallingstar2008
    Thank you so much for the comment, you made my day! I'm thankful you you liked, I was afraid it would be too predictable. Another chapter will hopefully be up in the next few days.
    July 25th, 2013 at 08:09am
  • fallingstar2008

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    Wow amazing chapter :) seriously loved it! Can't wait to read the next one.
    July 24th, 2013 at 06:21pm
  • skinny love.

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    Aww thank you for the shout out, dear! :D
    Anyways, this was cute. I liked the small conversation between the two, it will give both of them something to think about. ;)

    Update soon!
    June 11th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • BeautifullyAwestruck

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    @ hectic glow.
    I know, an update? I really am sorry for the delay, I had had the chapter half done for at least a week before now and just couldn't find time to finish. I've got the next couple of chapters planned so expect another chapter in the next few days
    May 27th, 2013 at 09:54am
  • skinny love.

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    Aww I want to know more about Austrailia and what's keeping her so down!.
    Lovely update as always! :)

    If you could would you mind checking out my Harry Styles fanfic? It is called Dark Side.

    Xx
    May 27th, 2013 at 06:44am
  • big bad wolf.

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    an update? wow!!! yes!!!
    May 26th, 2013 at 07:28pm
  • skinny love.

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    I knew that was going to happen haha.
    Lovely update!
    May 6th, 2013 at 05:44pm
  • ConfidentCoward0696

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    This story is really good i hope you update soon
    May 6th, 2013 at 04:11pm
  • skinny love.

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    Ooooh, I see where this is going! Loving it!
    May 4th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • ConfidentCoward0696

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    This story is catching my interesr quite nicely i cant wait to read more!
    May 4th, 2013 at 05:29pm
  • skinny love.

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    You're most certainly welcome. I have subscribed to this as well, I really do like it so far!
    xx
    April 30th, 2013 at 07:11pm
  • BeautifullyAwestruck

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    @ ConfidentCoward0696
    Thank you so mush for reading and commenting, you made my day! I going to try and update as fast as humanely possible for a student working crazy hours with insane sporting commitments :)
    April 30th, 2013 at 01:58pm
  • BeautifullyAwestruck

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    @ skinny love.
    Thanks for the advice, and for simply commenting :) I was just thinking that it looked quite squished and was harder to read than I had obviously indented it to be.
    April 30th, 2013 at 01:55pm
  • skinny love.

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    Some advice, space out your paragraphs and dialogue so it is easier to read - plus this will help so you don't get reported for those silly things.
    April 30th, 2013 at 06:10am
  • ConfidentCoward0696

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    Im excited so far, this seems like a really good story please updte soon!
    April 29th, 2013 at 05:15pm