I'm See Through - Comments

@ Embracing Shadows
Yeah I know it's one of my favorite songs on it and Crimson Day!! Ahahah and my GF got me the boxed set, my friend received hers yesterday and I am waiting for mine!

@ Matt Sanders;
Oh my god. I've had Acid Rain on repeat all evening/night! My hubby downloaded it (the album) for me so I didn't have to stream it. Of course, I'll purchase the legal version as soon as it's out. Until then... I've got it on my iPod for easy listening at the gym/on lunch at work. Acid Rain is amazing. It's inspiring pieces for multiple current stories.

"Not even stars last forever... Cleanse us, Acid Rain...."

@ Embracing Shadows
Ahahah I can tell and I know!! It's like...stop it! You're giving us too many ideas for stories! I wanna listen to Acid Rain again, get a feel for it and see if that inspires anything!

@ Matt Sanders;
There's too much brilliance going on up in here. I can never get it all out! I have story ADD too...

@ Embracing Shadows
I see, well I get bored sometimes too so I do understand; plus you need to make way for more brilliance!

@ Matt Sanders;
Well, ah... You see... I got bored of writing it, so I ended it rather weirdly. But since you guys are enjoying it, I may re-start it via a sequel and give it the real ending it was originally meant to have. We'll see.
And yeah, foreshadowing going on there indeed.

Uh oh do I feel some forshadowing? Or is it my tired brain, I can't even sepll that word! Ahahah only two more updates! I just...who is she truly going to end up with?

I feel like Zacky going to find out about Matt and Beka
Amazing chapter
Update soon

I never thought about spelling Madisyn with a y :)
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Amazing chapter
Can't wait to find out what happens

Oh my gosh this is amazing and I can't wait to read more :)!! This story is amazing and I wonder what is going to happen, I really do!

I had a feeling Val and her was going to ha e the babies around the same time :)
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I'm going crazy not knowing who she's going to end up with Matt or Zacky?
Amazing chapter
Can't wait to find out what happens next

@ Embracing Shadows
Yeah now you have me really intrigued :)!!

@ Matt Sanders;

It's complicated. & if I ever write the actual rest of this story (which will have to be as a sequel because I ended this one interestingly...), certain aspects will come to light that weren't shown in this version. First person perspective and all.

I can't believe she is doing that to Zacky and yout hink it would be easy for her to make a choice and now Val has gone into labor the same time that Beka has and now he is going to leave his son and her!! Gosh!

I want to punch both Beka and Matt
Zacky's going to be hurt shoot a lot of them are going to get hurt in this story before things are going to get better.
I don't know who Beka will end up with or not
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Amazing chapter
Can't wait for more

@ Embracing Shadows that's ok :) I get it. I feel the same way about Mr. Vengeance!

@ littlepieceofheaven7- *giggles* My preference for Matt has a tendency to take over my stories...

I'm beyond furious right now...which means you are an amazing writer. While I get that Matt is the father of her child and he's attractive and all, Zacky is such a good guy. Grr. He's being protective, yes, but clearly he has his reasons for being suspicious. That's ok...I'll take him off her hands and treat him right!

i just read this story in like two days and i really hope beka and matt and val works things out all together and zack stops being over protected and alexa and brian are happy forever and i really want to keep reading more of it

Oh man I really hope nothing happens between Matt and Beka it will break Zacky's heart.
Update soon
I love this story :)
Can't wait to see what happens
Amazing chapter like always :D