@ Stupidly Naive Honestly, I think they are only minor, I've caught a few but after I posted them, The readers should be able to pick up and proccess. The world isn't dead yet. I think it is awesome that you like my story, I'm not all that good of a writer. I do re-read my chapters, but I real rather quick. You can call it a blessing and and a curse.
Your story is interesting so far, but I've noticed a few errors. I think your brain works faster than your hands type. But it's a good story so far though. I'd just recommend rereading chapters before you post them or maybe getting a beta?
Mah. Meh. Me. Gahhh. This story.. is the sex. And that's all I'm gonna say about it.. For now. I can't get I over the perfection I've just read. So next time expect a full blown paragraph expressing my love for this story. I do that a lot.. Update soon, yeah? Yes? Now.