Amnesia - Comments

This story is awesome! Cannot wait to read more!

So.... I adore this story very much. So much, rather. It's got a really good beginning, I'm so excited to see where you take this! :)))

PS- I'm so sorry for your loss. </3

hi! so, i was gonna write a super hyper comment (the next chapters are utterly adorable, with frank all curious and innocent and almost child-like), possibly joke about you finally updating, but, yeah, after reading the final authir note, that... might not be such a good idea? i dont know, i never know what to say when stuff like this happen (sorry for your loss?), but yeah, i hope things get better and you are ok, as far as possible... ok? =)
update soon?

@ Gee's Coffee
I am so glad that you are enjoying it!

Thank you for reading and commenting. ^-^

hiiiiii, oh my holy flying fuck, i totally love this chapter so much, i cant even
GAAAAAHHHHH
ok, now. great chapter. please update soon! =)

@ Gee's Coffee
haha thank you so much, enjoy. I didn't change it much, I liked it the way it was for the most part.

@ momiji_neyuki
hahah thank you so much for all your kind words. it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I'm really glad it came off the way i wanted it to, i was a little worried.

Okay, first, mad compliments on using the.50 words to posh up Gerard correctly. I don;t know how many fics I have read that end up sounding pretentious and mast of the words are used in wrong context. @~@

Second, congrats on getting a Ficwad account. I have been there for a few months and they are pretty cool people. I have the same name there, I hope you do to, it will be easier to find you and give you awesome reviews there too! ^-^

Finally, you are not as predictable as you think you are. As I have read each chapter, this story could still go several ways. I am not familiar with all your writing, but I have a feeling you are anything, but predictable. ^-^

Okay, that's enough ass kissing for this chapter, can't wait for the next, oh and totally subscribed. ^-^

heeey, great chapter, i cant wait for the next one! (yeah, i know, ive already read whats gonna happen, but what can i do...? i just like this story, ok? XD)

@ Killjoy_beanie
Definitely saving that part for a little bit later. (: Thank you!

@ Gee's Coffee
I appreciate the fact that you commented at all. I really appreciate that.

@ TheGirlNightwing
I've never really considered a character sketch. I think I'll draw a few of them up tonight honestly. Thank you for the suggestion and the love <3

@ lyra
Thank you so much! I will try.

I really love this story, please update soon :D

Yes, that did take forever, story-Gerard.
Character developement? I usually, when writing original fiction, write out a biography on them and draw them before even considering a plot, but they always end up a tangled mess in the emotions department... It's intreguing though, and my friends say it's cool...
I think your character developement is good. As long as you don't have them sad, then, bam! Happy, it's fine. You're not giving away too much in one chapter about them, which is rare.
Can't wait to see more :)

uh, i dont know a lot about developing characters, but, you know, like @Killjoy_beanie said, there's the story before the rewrite, so... yeah. not really helpful, i know. anyway, i love your story, cant wait for more! =)

:( uhhmmm ... What about the story you did before the re write?? When he gets injured and the hospital part? Unless you're saving that for a different chapter. Hhmmm. Gerard could start to pull himself together and try and help frank. Frank should start to be nicer to gerard. Frank could start being distant from the football team?? Idek. But I hope some of this helps :/ <3 xx

Update? Now? Maybe? Again?? X :D

This is amazing, you know that right? I love it!

@ TheGirlNightwing
Thank you so much, dear(:

@ tedted5
Yeah, I kinda meant for it to be a sort of circular truism, almost like karma, but at the same time be really really sad. I'm really glad you like it, thank you(:

Aww. This. Adorable, yet sad. Love it :)

Holy crapola. It kinda sucks that the one time Frank needs comfort he doesn't get it because the person offering it to him is paranoid by Frank himself... That was a great chapter by the way.. I really can't wait for the next chapter

damm that was some sad shizz but a great update :)