Ok then I don't quite believe her though
July 6th, 2013 at 05:08am
Show Me the Stars, Smith - Comments
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Great as always but you switched POV in the middle of the chapter. I recommend sitting down and creating a plan for what you want to happen and break it down into chapters. But make it so you can have some filler chapters with cliff hangers. I think that should help to spice up you Story.July 4th, 2013 at 08:32am
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can't wait keep them coming.June 27th, 2013 at 11:21pm
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Sounds great and I will be the first one to comment and read it!June 20th, 2013 at 10:00pm
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Please keep them coming!June 19th, 2013 at 12:10am
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Keep them comeing this is great.June 17th, 2013 at 11:23pm
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@ watson2013
thank you :)June 16th, 2013 at 10:41pm -
Chapter 20 was goodJune 16th, 2013 at 07:00pm
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Go on chapter 19 was good!June 16th, 2013 at 03:40am
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@ TheHornsOfMischief
cheers bro ;)June 13th, 2013 at 09:36pm -
I'm hooked I really amJune 13th, 2013 at 09:26pm
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I'm hooked I really amJune 13th, 2013 at 09:26pm
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Can'r wait for the next chapter keep them comingJune 13th, 2013 at 12:37am
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@ watson2013
will do haha :)June 12th, 2013 at 08:54pm -
@haznaz
Glad becuse you need to update.June 12th, 2013 at 06:23pm -
@ watson2013
aww why thanks that means a lot :)June 12th, 2013 at 06:01pm -
This is shaping up I think you have something good going on here. :DJune 11th, 2013 at 09:50pm
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@ watson2013
sure thing i am going to try and write more tonight glad you are liking it so much :DJune 11th, 2013 at 05:52pm -
Love it! Please post the 19th chapter soon!June 11th, 2013 at 05:46am
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Absolutely no problem Coker ;)May 9th, 2013 at 08:08pm
