I'm Lost Without You - Comments

We are our own worst critics. I think this is very good. I'm glad you're keeping it here and not deleting it. Like you said, your emotions are poured in it and I see that when I read it.

@A.J.
Thank you so much, I personally don't like it very much at all honestly. I feel like it was not descriptive enough, but in the same I just can not bring myself to delete it. While it may not be my favorite thing that I have written it is still a part of me, and my of my emotions at the time are poured into that. I am very appreciative for the kind comment though. I am currently reading Lullabies and Goodbyes, and I am loving it so much so far. The first chapter was heart breaking and it's really good so far. ^.^

OMG I'll admit I don't know who Frank and Gerard are, but I've read m/m stories with them in it. I don't think it's necessary for me to know who they are as you portrayed two men in love very well. ( I listen to A7X, Godsmack, Chevelle...) But I know these two are in a group.
Anyway, back to my review. You made me have so much feeling here. The loss, the despair, the wanting to die. This is written with so much feeling and authenticity. Makes me wonder if you've experienced something like this already at your young age. You hit the nail on the head with Gerard's pain and heartache. I just want to hug him. BUT, I know he's with his Frank now and they're happy. Kudos on a great story. XX