Burn Me Like the Sun - Comments

FUCK YES BLAKE YOU STAND YOUR GROUND

@ BecauseSheSaidSo
The Giles thing will take a few more chapters until we get an explanation. But you're right, Louis deserves all of this and more and he needs to do some work to get Blake back. But I don't think he'd ever give up on her so easily. Thank you so much, man. I always love your comments!

Jesus Christ I'm actually tearing up here wow.
Okay well um after a second of collecting myself: Louis is still a twat. Although I do feel sorry for him, but at the same time he does deserve everything Blake said to him, buuut. Oh God, it's just a lot. Louis had better pull out whatever the fuck to get Blake back because damn.
I honestly don't know what to say. This is stressing me out, but I love it. Really on the edge of my seat about what will happen in the next chapter.
p.s. Giles, what are you doing. What is this "calling in"? Something is fishy.

@ skyelilly
Props to you for sticking around. A lot of people are giving up, so it just means that much more that you've not left yet. Now. Giles's little song and dance won't be addressed for another ten chapters or so. But the two of them have an important bit in another five chapters, I think? Around there. Not too far away. You'll have them back to some extent. Not the same, but eventually. Trust me on this. We've got a ways to go before it'll be the same again, even more than just the five, but it'll be worth it. Thank you. You always leave such lovely comments.

God, I love this story, but it just breaks my heart lately. It's just :( all around. I just don't know what or how or when everything is going to be them bantering with each other again. (PS still all up for Louis getting his ass kicked by Liam). Also, what is Giles up to? Two of the five get called in (that we know of) I have so many questions.

@ Lawliet.
HE IS THOUGH don't apologize! He deserves all the name calling in the world. Thanks again, man. I always love your comments.

@ xstoriesyettounfoldx
32. Patience, kiddo.

@ DeficientlyObscure
Yooooooo you said it. That's exactly what I wanted, for people to feel for Louis but still hate what he did. Because that's where Blake is at right now, you know? Interesting theory, by the way! Thank you so much.

this is horrible this is terrible louis is such a twat and he freaking needs to asdfghjkl; idek im sorry please update soon

My heart whimpered at the memory
I'M WHIMPERING AT EVERYTHING

“He tipped off the paparazzi at Forbidden Planet.”
That little BASTARD.

My chest felt heavy and all at once light, like there was a hollow space where my heart should have been, suddenly replaced with hot air and a dull sense of want.
STOOOOOOOP

IM SAD YOU'VE MADE ME SAD EVERYTHING HURTS I JUST NEED HAPPY I NEED LOUIS TO STOP BEING SUCH A FUCKING WANKER AND JUST FIX EVERYTHING OR SOMETHING I DONT KNOW I *SOBS*

I feel like Blake is more mad at herself for still liking Louis, this chapter gave me some mad feels, I can't even just poor Blake. I also feel for Louis though, I feel like there is more going on though and Liam has something to do with it. I can't wait to see what happens next.

@ a quarter and a kiss
Yesssss I was just wondering but like I said before I just want them to be happy again cries but that was brilliantly written!!

@ Zen Molek
It is ironic, isn't it. I can let it slide, though, considering what she's just gone through, you know? She's so hurt right now. But that line, read sarcastically - yes. Just yes. He's angry and emotional and frustrated, and I can just hear it clear as day, him saying that sarcastically. You've hit it right on the head.

You know I found it kind of ironic that Blake tells him he's stubborn or what not yet she's the exact same. So when he said "thanks for enlightening me." I read it as him being sarcastic. Am I right? Idk I just wanted to point that out cause I was honestly thinking about it heh ok yeah

@ xstoriesyettounfoldx
hahaha You're my favorite. Also, thank you for pointing out possibly my favorite line I've ever written.

@ BecauseSheSaidSo
He will try to prove himself and I don't think he'll ever stop trying. He feels so bad about this that there really isn't anything in his mind that could make up for it. Thank you!

I laughed heartily at the sight that greeted me, throwing my head back as I grinned scathingly. “You must be shitting me, mate.”
OH NO

The softest whimper escaped my throat
DONT YOU DARE

“Don’t you dare come any closer, you insufferable wanker,” I seethed. “I’ll fucking smash your teeth in, and your dentist will certainly have his work cut out for him then.”
EVERYTHING IS HORRIBLE

“I suppose. You know I’d rather Harry Styles’s sausage for lunch anyway,”
FRAN THE LIGHT OF MY LIFE

“Because he’s an idiot.” Liam sighed. “It doesn’t mean you’ve got no brains to speak of, Blake. It doesn’t say shit about you but it says loads about him.”
I AM SO SAD

IM SO SAD AND SO MAD AND YOU'RE THE WORST (NO YOU ARENT)

Dangit dangit dangit it was so hard to read this! But a really great update. I like that how's she's dealing with it is very real. Usually in most fanfics the characters forgives right away, but I like Blake. Dammit Louis needs to seriously ugh I don't even know he just needs to prove himself. :( Can't wait for the next update!

@ Zen Molek
Oh, man. You, me, and everyone else!

:-(((((

I just want them to be friends already again