Burn Me Like the Sun - Comments

JESUS BLAKE OH MY GOD
Sigh. Okay well. I am glad that they talked. But - dammit Louis is just pouring his heart out, excuse the cliche, and Blake is listening but she's not at the same time. I mean what did she expect when she went over there? What does she want Louis to do if - ugh okay I'm just frustrated right now, I need a breather. Loved this chapter though, so much emotion and a lot of things that needed to be said were said.
p.s. Harry is adorable and a good friend that is all

@ a quarter and a kiss
Ohhh, okay I understand now! Nah, don't apologize; it's always a challenge for writers to get readers to connect things (hell I know it's been hard for me to do that haha). c: Okay, now that that's understood then yeah Blake is going to need more convincing. Oh Lordy.

@ Zen Molek

@ BecauseSheSaidSo
Fran is the best catalyst, ain't she? I love her to bits. Now as far as Blake giving Louis another chance, I think she needs a little more convincing, don't you?

The ending, and I've noticed that my wording just isn't the best, it's just that Blake is only realizing that she shouldn't have let Louis fix her stove. It was a bad idea, because she's suddenly seeing all the strings that are attached to it and she's kind of just getting hit with it all at once. Does that make sense? I'll probably go back and change it just because it's been such a consistent problem with readers. You're not alone on it! My apologies.

Thank you so much!

@ rebel.at.heart.
lmao saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame!

That's quite the cliffhanger and all I can say is HOW RUDE

Can I just say that I am glad as hell that Fran staged a semi intervention because I think that was much needed. I really hope Blake is going to decide to give Louis one more chance. Not too sure that I understand what Blake has realized at the end of the chapter, but I think it's a good thing. I mean a good thing that she's realized it, but yeah. I dunno. I'm just giving Fran a round of applause right now.
Anyway, loved it overall and can't wait for the next update!

how in the WORLD is she ignoring adorable Niall selfies????
i would cave in a heartbeat hahah

@ BecauseSheSaidSo
I have to agree! Blake's stubborn. Of course, I know why, and I can excuse it, but that fine line is definitely there and she dances it all the same. She's complex and rigid and angry, and I think that's what makes her an interesting, challenging character to write, especially now with her friendship with Louis crumbling right in front of her. She's desperate and hurt, and all of these emotions mixed in with her personality and Louis's as well makes her reaction what it is. Thanks once again! I always love your comments.

@ xstoriesyettounfoldx
Same.

"I would have steered us straight into the nearest lamppost and saved myself a lot of embarrassment by just killing the both of us straight off" Story of my life, my friend, the story of.
WTF LOUIS if he read those messages I'm going to kill a man. As if he didn't do enough already. Ya done fucked up, Louis.
At the same time though, Blake is incredibly stubborn. That is all I'm going to say because I feel like there is a fine line between saying she should forgive Louis and saying that actually he does deserve everything she's doing to him. Because both ideas are true, and it confuses me on what to think.
Anyway, I really liked the chapter. Some things were cleared up, and that ending - bam, right to the face. Idk how I'm going to handle it if Louis really did read her messages. Good God. Looking forward to the next chapter!

“If bloody Hades showed up on my doorstop right now in a hellhound-drawn carriage made out of human skulls, I’d let him drop me off before I even so much as entertained the idea of being cooped up with you in that god-awful purple car of yours.”
INCREDIBLE

“You… You weren’t trying to make her jealous?”
OH

“I thought that you might enjoy the paparazzi’s attention. Or at least come to like it,”
IDIOT. ABSOLUTE IDIOT.

And all of them had been read.
GOD FUCKING DAMMIT LOUIS. GOD FUCKING DAMMIT ALL TO HELL.

@ Zen Molek
Patience, young grasshopper. We're only halfway through!

THEY BOTH MAKE ME SO SAD

I just want them both to be friends again :-(

Damn it Louis!!!

@ skyelilly
Hmmm, I don't know! Sure seems like it, doesn't it? Thanks, man!

Wait, so did he read her texts???? I can't wait for the next one

@ a quarter and a kiss
Know that it is well deserved. This story kicks ass and I can't wait for the next update:)

@ skyelilly
NOOOOOOooooo you can't just compare this to Sugar and Teeth like that! I'll have an aneurysm, and where would you be then, with nothing but a half-finished story filled with broken hearts? But thank you, really. I'm blushing. This was seriously the best compliment I could've received.

@ a quarter and a kiss
People are quitting this???!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I also hate exclamation points, so know that I'm serious about this shit. How can people quit this fabulous story which I hold dear to me like Sugar and Perfect Teeth at the moment. This is gold. This is perfection. Yeah, right now its super heartbreaking, but I love stuff like this and I can't wait to find out what happens. Like I can stick around because not everything is perfect and I like how real she reacts. I can't wait for more:) Can't wait for the next update:)

@ rebel.at.heart.