This is such an amazing story, and after you posted the first part I was eager to read more!
I love that each section has been separated. His admittance, her realisation, and then the confrontation. I like the way it was laid out, and you definitely left me feeling pretty excited to see what would happen when she finally told him. Holy hell was I completely blown when he dismissed the idea! I was screaming in my head! I just wanted them to love each other and be happy! But twists are what make a story beautiful!
I really love the layout you have! It's nice and simple, and doesn't distract from the writing. I'm glad you haven't gone all out with any colour, as the motion picture is all the attention you need!
I love that each section has been separated. His admittance, her realisation, and then the confrontation. I like the way it was laid out, and you definitely left me feeling pretty excited to see what would happen when she finally told him. Holy hell was I completely blown when he dismissed the idea! I was screaming in my head! I just wanted them to love each other and be happy! But twists are what make a story beautiful!
I really love the layout you have! It's nice and simple, and doesn't distract from the writing. I'm glad you haven't gone all out with any colour, as the motion picture is all the attention you need!
I can't wait to judge! This is a great story!
P.S. I'd be super pleased with a sequel!