I'm here as a judge for the Book Fanfiction Contest.
This was an interesting pairing, I can honestly say I have never seen, or even considered, Ron and Snape shipped or written about. The way you wrote the contrast in their personalities was interesting -- I appreciated how you mentioned the changes that Ron went through due to the war and how Snape surprised himself with how he was acting.
I wish we would have gotten a bit more character development within the story. I know these characters are already established well in the books and movies, but because you're putting together a pairing that isn't cannon, it would have been nice to get more insight into how exactly they got to that point. You alluded to it, but I think more information would have helped establish things a bit more.
There were also quite a few grammar errors that started taking away from the story itself, small things like words not being capitalized and apostrophes being in the wrong place that just started to add up. If you were to come back to this story (since I know it's been a few years since you wrote it) I would suggest looking over it again to pick up on all those things.
Overall though, this was an interesting story to read. Thanks for entering!
This was an interesting pairing, I can honestly say I have never seen, or even considered, Ron and Snape shipped or written about. The way you wrote the contrast in their personalities was interesting -- I appreciated how you mentioned the changes that Ron went through due to the war and how Snape surprised himself with how he was acting.
I wish we would have gotten a bit more character development within the story. I know these characters are already established well in the books and movies, but because you're putting together a pairing that isn't cannon, it would have been nice to get more insight into how exactly they got to that point. You alluded to it, but I think more information would have helped establish things a bit more.
There were also quite a few grammar errors that started taking away from the story itself, small things like words not being capitalized and apostrophes being in the wrong place that just started to add up. If you were to come back to this story (since I know it's been a few years since you wrote it) I would suggest looking over it again to pick up on all those things.
Overall though, this was an interesting story to read. Thanks for entering!